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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is exciting. So did they pull up to their driveway and see the never before seen sedan there. If so, does that mean Joseph is in the house and did he notice anything out of the ordinary? Or did they do something to Joseph? I hope everyone is all right, although somethings liable to happen. It's been to safe so far so something has got to shake them up. Thanks for the update. I'm really enjoying where this story is going. This murder-mystery thing is really interesting. I can't wait for the next update. Thanks!
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter
how did the other group learn that they went and got the box
how did the other group learn that they went and got the box
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh so much is happening!
Gun fire? gosh...I was cringing when you said that...
There better be no fatalities on their side!
Loved the update!
Rx
Gun fire? gosh...I was cringing when you said that...
There better be no fatalities on their side!
Loved the update!
Rx
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WooHoo! I just love the Garrett men in action, protecting what they see as theirs. Fantastic chapter.
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So the action begins...
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god. you better not kill anyone off!
those must be some really juicy files.
can't wait for more. :)
those must be some really juicy files.
can't wait for more. :)
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better. I think you are doing a wonderful job and can't wait for more updates. I'm so glad you didn't let a few Stupid people stop your writing! Waiting on pins and needles for more, thank you. Nona
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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome and I love how you keep updating, many stories that i like the authors don't finish them which is so annoying. I really like how you portray the relationships between the characters, they seem more real than in most stories. Keep up with the great work and i can't wait to read the next chapter! xoxo
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“When did he get so lippy?” - haha... loved that!
ooh can't wait to see whats behind the wall, maybe it will actually get them somewhere.
ooh can't wait to see whats behind the wall, maybe it will actually get them somewhere.
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Goodness, dimes in paneling? You have the imagination of a Nancy Drew! Somehow the plot keeps rolling on. Thank you for Adam, Roth and Nathan (and cute lippy boys).