rate_review Reviews

Wow. I haven't visited AFF for a while, so gave it a shot last night to try to see if I could find any good m/m stories - and I was not disapointed when I found this one :D In the beginning of the story I felt like I was missing information, but it became much clearer after Ridge kidnapping and stuff. I figured out that there's a story before this one, yes? And now I wonder where I can find that? Is it Jason and Ridge's story? Anyways on to BF, I got more into the story as it progressed and I fell instantly in love with Joseph so I'm happy he got Nathan to love him ^_~ However I feel somtimes some things are not described enough (hard to explain when eng. isn't my first language *sorry*) and like it's unfinished... I'm one of those who like to picture the people and surrongings in my head and get emotionlly ripped away - dragged along. Like the "scene" at xmas where Roth gave Jason the neclace - it brought tears to my eyes, even though I didn't know the people at the party and who they where, but it came across how important that moment were for everyone. I'm sorry if this dosen't make much sense (your welcome to email me if you have any Q's: januarymoon9@yahoo.com) but I'm not trying to clank-down on your story, in fact I think it's very good- so good that I read it all in one go staying up late at night/early morning to do so. I love all the snuggle and smex scence, love romance :). I have another question though, the part where Natan proposed to Joseph, it it supposed to be cut-off? It feels unfinished to me. I'm sorry if this makes you upset, it wasen't my point, I'm just trying to explain my thoughts on your writing/story never having read your work before, to maybe help you make it better (?) Should really stop this rambling now ;) Anyways ignore all the rest if you like, and remember this: I enjoyed reading so far, and am looking forward reading to the end, 'cause this is a really fantastic story.

What a sweet chapter, Roth is just to good. I love the whole family and your stories. thank you for keeping on writing. Nona

Sorry to bother you but I was a huge fan of Ridge's story and now of Roth's too but im not actually a member of AFF.net because i can't write to save my life. You posted that there's a list to receive last chapters of Before You, is that because you will be taking it down and is that what happened with Until You? would it be possible to be put on those lists even though i'm not a member? I completely understand if it's not. thanks.

Forgot to put email in above request for chapters:( ezbrewster@aol.com

Until You came down due to pre-release contractual issues. I have sent you an invitation to be included on the mailing list. Just accept it and you should be golden. I have no problem with non-members receiving finals. It's always just a little depressing to only hear from a reader when they want to get the last chapters. Thanks for speaking up and letting me know you're reading!

I will have to close invites within the next few weeks, so I hope everyone speaks up for themselves. You'll receive update notifications until the time I go private. Then, receive final chapters directly in the body of the email.

Happy slashing, everyone!

KD

I don't usually review, but I just had to saw that I'm really growing to love Naddy.
At first it felt a little like she was just thrown in to make sure that there was actually a woman in this story. Now I love her wit, and seeing her begin to accept help with Roth is just so sweet. Damn it, your stories always make me so happy, haha!

Also, totally forgot to ask. If I was on the mailing list for Until You, will I be on the one for Before You? If not please add me too :) I can't imagine not getting to read what happens in the end.

Wow, I've been out for a long time! A lot has changed.

I've said it before, and I'll say it again now: You are awesome. Your writing is awesome. Your grammar is perfect. Your storylines are amazing. I could say more but then this review would be pages long. ;P

Anyways...I think I'm on the mailing list but I'm not sure...I guess I'll find out soon. :)

In conclusion...you rock, you're amazing, and keep writing!

It's amazing to see Adam so vunerable despite being a trained killer. It seems being with Roth has made him more of a man and less an indefferent emotional machine. I completly think that if Roth and Joseph let him, he would storm Alfredo an kill him to get it over...

Do they get a double weddingg?!?!

thankies for another wonderful chapter!

is the mailing list the same list for until you?
if not, can you add me to the new one?