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by KristinaDalton

schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Naddy is hard as rocks and twice as fiery. She gives a whole new taste into the crockpot of characters, she is really an amazing character. Can't wait to see what happens with her. But still the issue of Adam is very appealing. It seems that after so long he is really cracking, that is the best part i think so far - how he is turning human.

schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmmm luc...now because he is related to roth and ridge he is automatically hot in my book. luc sounds delicious can't wait to read about his description...adam's got some demons and i'm sure he's handling them the best he can...just hope it doesn't get him or anyone else into too much trouble.
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wait wait wait... exactly the same thing is happening in this story as happened in 'Until You'!
person crazyforkakaashi
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Naddy half-turned, then did a double take. “What the hell? That’s a shiny black man as your cousin?”

That was the best part of the chapter for me . Naddy has a way with words.Please keep it up.
person lazyluna
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha, love it! Give Roth a pair of angel wings and a bow, and call 'im cupid!

Heart goes out to Adam, looks like he's got some demons to face. Seems like Adam and Nathan butt-heads the most of the four guys.
person Hello
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awe, love the two recent chapters. So far, I like how things are progressing with Naddy, I seem to like her character a lot right now. Still, I wonder what will happen with Adam and I hope some good comes out of a bad situation.
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! Another Garrett for the mix. It just keeps getting better and better.
person loving
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice add
person Bianca D.
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story; I enjoy the plot especially. I think it was an excellent idea to put the part with the safe, papers from Adam's Dad and all that in there. It added a ton of "spice."

I meant to review a few days ago to ask you about Naddy. I don't really get her point in the story. Is she there to show Roth's giving/human side? I think Joseph definitely did that. Or is she there to have the baby for Roth and Adam to dote on like Jenny in your other story? I was going to ask you if she would have a romantic interest in this story, but this chapter (I think) just answered that question.

Are you still taking people for your mailing list? If you are, will you please add me to your list? My email is blizzieb@yahoo.com. If not, I guess I was too late, oops!
person Rose
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Naddy's going to get some sugar!

Adam needs a cage...a padded one with tons of items to punch and break

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