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for Undercover Predicament

by Reike

schedule November 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting start. I hope you continue it. You've certainly done well with it so far.
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu
person Saminada
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! This story's GREAT!! I can't wait to read more of this!! Plz update it! >_<

I'm just to curious! He's in trouble! lol

Thanks alot for the story! *hugs*
person J42
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an exciting start! Thanks for sharing it - any further inspiration here? :D
person Jetfire
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Tis, as always brilliant. Wonderful. Everything I've already told you. Still not fond of the name Mika....but you know why. Anyway can't wait for more of what you're writing.
Sorry this aint a long review.

Love ME!
person wynja
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really like the start! Want to find out more about the main character like what he looks like and his age and so on. but I guess that's coming... When I started reading I was hoping he'd bee in his teens, but then I read about him working for his boss for ten years... allthough criminals can start out young I guess, but maybe not THAT young... *grin* ANyway, that dosen't matter, i'm just curious about where this story is going...
person Perona
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love all your stories, they're just so much fun to read--and your protagonists are all so spunky. Anyway, this story is great so far. Yay mafia stories!
person tf
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well this is definitely an exciting start; can't wait to see how things play out!
person J42
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good start! Looking forward to more Mika adventures. ;-)
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Promising fic cant wait for me

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