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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you'll continue this story because the first two chapters are great!
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i wonder how they'll communicate, if they communicate at all. good chapter.
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is definitely going in an interesting direction, I can’t wait for more.
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Update soon!
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Update soon!
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok so this story is magic
you've got me going awww over a seven foot lizard man who smells like cinnamon
Colin's really cute. and so is Prater.
I also love how absolutely starved for sexual contact Colin is.
also, Rothgar? I want to meet Rothgar!
you've got me going awww over a seven foot lizard man who smells like cinnamon
Colin's really cute. and so is Prater.
I also love how absolutely starved for sexual contact Colin is.
also, Rothgar? I want to meet Rothgar!
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol, I'm not grossed out yet, but I'm very fascinated. heh, Father-Zorn. nice name. I could never communicate with just gestures. I'd probably end up pissing them off because they have no idea what the hell I'm trying to say, hahaha~
Again, reading this was really hot. But I got really curious, if Zorns are so huge, then would Prater still have a problem 'taking Colin to the hilt'? x3 I'm so perverted.
Again, reading this was really hot. But I got really curious, if Zorns are so huge, then would Prater still have a problem 'taking Colin to the hilt'? x3 I'm so perverted.
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is definately is going to be a good story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are absolutely creative! I love the stuff you come up with! LOL seriously! Can't wait for more hot stuff!
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*grins widely* Wow! I just read the last chapter of "At the Mercy of My Big Brother" earlier today, and here's a new story! I love it! It's so completely different from the other one but it's strangely hot... I must be... weird... *grin* Well, I'm glad I am in that case, so there! ;o) It's a great idea and I can't wait to read the rest! Please continue soon?
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ah! I want to know what Collin is in for! Though, I couldn't possibly imagine how it would feel xP Especially because of the Zorn's teeth, eheheh~
Oh crud, I just love your stories! They're so hot. While this one is different, it's not bad at all :D It's great to experiment. And I would probably fit in with the people on Zoron, I'm only...5'? Way too short! Makes me wish I had drunk more milk when I was younger XD 'Milk'. Damn! now I'm just gonna keep laughing whenever I think about it.
I just finished reading reading Tran's adventure too. I'm gonna get a toothache from having indulged myself on these sweet stories ;D Thanks for the start of what I'm sure will be a great story.
Oh crud, I just love your stories! They're so hot. While this one is different, it's not bad at all :D It's great to experiment. And I would probably fit in with the people on Zoron, I'm only...5'? Way too short! Makes me wish I had drunk more milk when I was younger XD 'Milk'. Damn! now I'm just gonna keep laughing whenever I think about it.
I just finished reading reading Tran's adventure too. I'm gonna get a toothache from having indulged myself on these sweet stories ;D Thanks for the start of what I'm sure will be a great story.
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alright this seems very promising, cant wait to see more ~8}