rate_review Reviews

O....M....G!!! Trying to wrap my brain around a Zorn and a human having sex. I know, or course, that I'm sorta getting ahead of the story. But, thats where my mind is right now. Sometimes I go to a dark place in my mind. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hope there are no loooooooong waits between chapters. Have a list of stories that I'm keeping tabs on and there is one that is taking FOREVER for the next chapter. Readers lose interest if there is too long a wait. They, like me, feel that the author has either abandoned the story or simply cannot come up with a story for the next chapter. I sincerely hope that will not be the case for this story.

oh baby. Gross me out. :]

hehe awesome story!
original plot and great writing.
keep up the good work and update as soon as you can.

Hah, this story is coming along excellently. I really like the milking idea and I like your writing style. Good luck, keep it up!

it sorta reminds me of all the milking pictures i've seen on 4chan where boys become cows and are kept at factories to get 'milked'

yum =]

Yay! another update! Prater is so gentle with him its so sweet! And what on earth was father Zorn trying to do goodness?! Look forward to the next one~~~ I had thought this was going to be a two or three-shots story but I am even happier knowing that it is turning out to be a series instead =D wee~~~

Thanks! Looking forward to more in this intriguing sci-fi story. :-)

Weird (really really really weird) but I like it, I do. Please continue.

WOOT!!! I loved it!!! It looks HOT! LOL

I can't wait to see what happens next!

Thanks alot for the story! *hugs*

Well, at least he likes him - that's good xD But the other dood sounds like he's going to be a bit of a problem.

I am still oddly fastinated xD I do believe I shall stick around and see where it goes.