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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another update in such a short while! You are so cool.....i'm so happy~~~ Wee~~ Honestly my day sucked, but you made it all better already..... Great chapter. Like the doctor by the way.... Like your concept of the slave system thing..
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! This story is very interesting, aliens basically using Human's as we do cows but in a more sexy and perverted kind of way. o_o I wonder if they only drink come from males...do they just use females to 'breed' or do they use the breast milk? I kinda hope not. I wonder if they make cheese out of it....Okay that was a bad picture...D:
I kinda wish there were more descriptions of how the characters look (mostly the main ones.) I'm not sure if you did already, because then I forgot.
I kinda wish there were more descriptions of how the characters look (mostly the main ones.) I'm not sure if you did already, because then I forgot.
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YEAY! ANother chapter! I haven't had time to rev the last one... I'm definately one of those wou just can't look away... *grin* Was planning to write more, but next chap is calling... if it's only an A/N or something I'm going to cry...
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! you update fast
very yummy chapter
i has a question though. since the Zorns seem to be using the cum as nourishment, do they see fellatio with humans as a sexual thing or as just like sucking through a straw?
cuz Colin seems to be really enjoying it but is it all that he's gona get?
very yummy chapter
i has a question though. since the Zorns seem to be using the cum as nourishment, do they see fellatio with humans as a sexual thing or as just like sucking through a straw?
cuz Colin seems to be really enjoying it but is it all that he's gona get?
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello this is the author here. I'm not going to be updating today...probably will tomorrow tho, but I'm not sure. Anyhoo I wanted to answer the questions being asked so that you guys won't be pondering all day. AO, not to worry I will include more descriptions of the main characters. You are probably wondering about Colin. The information I've given right now is that he has dark hair and he's dark bronze in skin tone, five feet four inches tall, and hairless like all Zoron humans, aside from the hair on his head.
ariesgirl, Not to worry either. Like the Pagermaster told the little boy, "Look to the Books". I say "Look to the warnings!" lol Anal, Rim,Dom, oh, yeah you can expect some smexiness. Colin is not just a milk stud: he is a slave, and Zorns can do whatever they wish. It is not uncommon for Zorns to use them for all modes of pleasure, which you will soon find out. :)
ariesgirl, Not to worry either. Like the Pagermaster told the little boy, "Look to the Books". I say "Look to the warnings!" lol Anal, Rim,Dom, oh, yeah you can expect some smexiness. Colin is not just a milk stud: he is a slave, and Zorns can do whatever they wish. It is not uncommon for Zorns to use them for all modes of pleasure, which you will soon find out. :)
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say I love your story so, can't wait for more!
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HA! I actually had time to review before you updated! I WON! Wait... that didn't make any sense, but it felt good, so whatever... *grin* I'm so in love with this story it's scary... the big brother seems scary too... I think I'll go hide behind the sofa... Oh and the "slot-fitting"-thing sounds very intriguing... I wonder what that can mean? *looks completely innocent*
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing... Nice evocation of another culture/world, and plenty of smut... Love it. 'Purr
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
W00T!! Awesome update!!! I LOOOOOOOOOOOVED it! :D
I can't wait to read more of this story! It's so Hot!
Thanks alot for the update! It was perfecto! ^________^
I can't wait to read more of this story! It's so Hot!
Thanks alot for the update! It was perfecto! ^________^
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just found your story, well I got to say it's an interesting concept and I certainly haven't seen anything like it before. Being a hopeless sci-fi and slash fiction lover this has those basics covered. I like your characters so far and the situation they find themselves in, you did a good job setting up why thing were the way they are. I hope you stick with it, I'll keep my eye out for more on this story. Thanks for sharing it.