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Moar!

WOW you updated! A very pleasant surprise. I was dying to see what else would happen to poor Collin... although I think I would love to be in his position right now, with a sexy Zorn sucking him off every day...

So hot to read! Does this make me a pervert? LOL. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next update where Collin gets ~deflowered~

WOW! So strange! I had forgotten about this story until a few days ago when it popped into my mind for no reason... well... no reason I would care to tell anyone about, anyway... ;) and here it is! I liked this a lot, it's so strange but very, very hot... hoe your muse is up for a second round very soon....

That was awesome and so erotic I love the tongue fucking thing so amazingly done would be kind of cool to know what's going through Prator's head while he's screwing with his little human full of so much milky goodness for him. I can't wait for the next update and thank you so much fo sharing

his toungue can't be bigger then his dick. It's gonna hurt. If it hurts it might be rape. No fun in that, ey?

Hi,

WOW, I'm a new reader, just found your fic and read the 4 chapters back to back! It was great! but I'm sure happy to find it this late otherwise I would have wait for each chapter for soooo long! Is the next chapter coming like in 6 months?!!!! ohhhhh please, please update soon! It's just got to its most exciting part! Poor Colin, how could he take such a big thing for the first time! lol four times in a row!!! he is gonna pass out after this.

Well, I do enjoy your storyline, your way of telling it , ... everything is perfect and I really feel desperate when I think I have to wait for a long time to see what happen next! I just wanted to read and read! :p I know that's easy for me to say but please make a month instead of several months! :D Please please ...

I think I'm gonna go and check out your rest of fics, they should be as delicious as this one! ;)

Thanks for sharing it ^_^

O hell yes. This is so awesome, I love the way you think. And your writing is so descriptive. Please update soon!

Oh Yumm!!! Tasty story. Lovely questions abound. This grabbed me from the very first bit, and am hungry for more.

AW! I've missed this story and I thought this was an update! But maybe soon? Hope so!

Just seen your story up again, doing some editing on it I guess. I reread it, it's still very interesting. Will you be continuing this story? Do you have any other chapters in the works. I hope you do, I'd love to see what happens between Colin & Prater.