rate_review Reviews

I really like this story. It's a nice take on sci-fi reality and homoerotic romance. I love it most, because it's so unconventional. I do hope you decide to continue this story.

PLEASE UPDATE!!!! love the story its really good

I can't tell if my review went through...and I don't want to re-write it. Thank God for paraphrasing.

1. I want a Prater. He can hide in my closet when I have company.
2. I'm short
3. I love this story
4. Avatar
5. Porn
4. How long do you plan to make this?

I will keep reading and attempting to review until the last chapter. Please tell me you like happy endings. I'll cry if Prater dies or Collin dies...or if they separate. Oh God! Don't let him stop giving 'milk' TT_TT Now I'm depressed. I'm looking forward to chapter 6 :')
-Aaiya

I liked this quite a alot it was so sweet and intimate. I'm really glad that this Zorn isn't a complete jerk although I can't wait for him to give this kid a major fucking but I can wait for it a little longer yeah I am a little degenerate at times. I just hope that Zorn makes it really awesome for the kid or I should say you make it awesome for the kid. The bath was really sweet and sensual your doing well keep it up I'll be waiting for your next update.

I hope you continue this story because I am fascinated by it. The characters are interesting and though it maddens me that there is a lack of comunication, I think it was a very good choice to have the communication between the two character difficult. I enjoy it and hope to read more.

LOVE IT! SO happy you are back.. Wonderful chapts i tell you... Thank you for returning~~

I just found this story and had five chapters to read and I have to say you got me hooked.
It kind of reminds me of City of Gold and Lead by John Christopher. It's a childrens' book and just a side story is that when I was reading the series as a kid I always thought there was something *odd* about the aliens called tripods in the book but I couldn't really tell what it was. And then a couple of years ago I saw the book in the bookstore and decided to read the preface and in the preface the author said that he previously used the tripods in an erotic fiction before he decided to use them as a characther in childrens' fiction story. So I was like ahh thats what was "odd" about the tripods and the way they were curious about human physique and vice versa when I was reading the book as a kid.
So when Colin was studying the Zorn in the bathtub and came across a physical weakness in them I was immediately reminded of the tripod series. Maybe this can be my grown up version of one of my favorite fictions as a kid. Keep up the good work :-)

hope u continue soon!!!! love this story!

very interesting i like this story i cant wait to see what happens next update soon ^_^

I really liked this story. I've been in the mood for alien stories lately and this was perfect. Your writing style is very easy to read and enjoyable and you include just enough detail to really pull me into the story.

This may sound crazy, but your story's plot really reminded me of the book "The Time Machine." It's almost exactly how I wish "The Time Machine" would have been, with the characters getting lots of sex instead of being killed for food.