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November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice going this is getting really good hope u updated soon
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update soon. i reeeaaaalllyyyy like it.
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW what a great story....I feel like in a fantasy movie and can´t wait for more!
You writing is really nice - very easy going, something not all authors are capable of....
oh and keep your chapters that long, there´s nothing wores than too short chapters!!!
your new fan :)
You writing is really nice - very easy going, something not all authors are capable of....
oh and keep your chapters that long, there´s nothing wores than too short chapters!!!
your new fan :)
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Why haven't I seen this story before? Kehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. I'm glad I found it, though. :]
I've fallen in love with it~ you even got my heart pounding a little bit :O I was freaked out by the shadowy thing in the building.
e_e;
I'm also a coward. XD
Love the characters, love the plot (you never see this stuff anywhere!), etc etc. Eddie reminds me of a Latino guy I know. They all must be the same. *shrug*
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I wanna know the name of Mr. Snake! ... or I'll just call him that. O_o; Ehh.
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I've fallen in love with it~ you even got my heart pounding a little bit :O I was freaked out by the shadowy thing in the building.
e_e;
I'm also a coward. XD
Love the characters, love the plot (you never see this stuff anywhere!), etc etc. Eddie reminds me of a Latino guy I know. They all must be the same. *shrug*
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I wanna know the name of Mr. Snake! ... or I'll just call him that. O_o; Ehh.
♥
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cool cool! another turn! :] poor guy has to baby sit! LOL! but atleast it's to ray right ;]
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait to see what you do with this story! the suspense/anticipation is making me squirm...
great chapter!
great chapter!
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another great update!!
I can't wait to get to know these new characters...
And that master... He and his little bedmate sound hot!!!!
I can't wait to get to know these new characters...
And that master... He and his little bedmate sound hot!!!!
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So didn't see that comming. Yes yes poor Ray, no one believes him. And now someone wants to kill him! :O
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah...two chapters! Loverly! The second chapter was like reading a movie (if that makes any sense). I saw it all in my head, and it was quite riveting. Poor Ray! No one believes him! But I must say, i know that feeling of not believing something was just a dream. And Ray's disbelief and astonishment at the fact that nothing was torn apart was quite amusing and believable in itself! And who's this dark haired man? Sounds evil. *twilight zone music plays* ohh...scary!! I can't wait for the update! I'll wait oh so patiently!
"Seriously, I'm joking!" (SeriouslyJoking)
"Seriously, I'm joking!" (SeriouslyJoking)
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay now I'm like OMG? Poor Ray xD This is just getting more thrilling! I so don't know what's going to happen!
Great work!
Great work!