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nice going this is getting really good hope u updated soon

please update soon. i reeeaaaalllyyyy like it.

WOW what a great story....I feel like in a fantasy movie and can´t wait for more!
You writing is really nice - very easy going, something not all authors are capable of....
oh and keep your chapters that long, there´s nothing wores than too short chapters!!!

your new fan :)

Wow. Why haven't I seen this story before? Kehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. I'm glad I found it, though. :]
I've fallen in love with it~ you even got my heart pounding a little bit :O I was freaked out by the shadowy thing in the building.
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I'm also a coward. XD

Love the characters, love the plot (you never see this stuff anywhere!), etc etc. Eddie reminds me of a Latino guy I know. They all must be the same. *shrug*

Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I wanna know the name of Mr. Snake! ... or I'll just call him that. O_o; Ehh.
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cool cool! another turn! :] poor guy has to baby sit! LOL! but atleast it's to ray right ;]

i can't wait to see what you do with this story! the suspense/anticipation is making me squirm...

great chapter!

Thank you for another great update!!
I can't wait to get to know these new characters...
And that master... He and his little bedmate sound hot!!!!

So didn't see that comming. Yes yes poor Ray, no one believes him. And now someone wants to kill him! :O

Ah...two chapters! Loverly! The second chapter was like reading a movie (if that makes any sense). I saw it all in my head, and it was quite riveting. Poor Ray! No one believes him! But I must say, i know that feeling of not believing something was just a dream. And Ray's disbelief and astonishment at the fact that nothing was torn apart was quite amusing and believable in itself! And who's this dark haired man? Sounds evil. *twilight zone music plays* ohh...scary!! I can't wait for the update! I'll wait oh so patiently!

"Seriously, I'm joking!" (SeriouslyJoking)

Okay now I'm like OMG? Poor Ray xD This is just getting more thrilling! I so don't know what's going to happen!

Great work!