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for Serpentine Embrace

by lionsden

person damiem
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
man that was hottttttt i do sort of feel sorry for him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SIKE this is the best please update soon
person Perona
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooo great chapter, but poor eddie! I'm gonna miss him.
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah!!!!! More Please More!!! I would like to knon what'll happen next for Amos and Ray. Exciting to know how they falling to each other...and...and...Why Eddie had to die Y-Y... I think he should have some roll in the future...But it's alright. Hope to read more...
person Zero
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thank you for adding another chapter you rock of course i should have read it before i wrote this but that doesn't matter im just exited that you updated i'll be back again to give you more praise again thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu for your update

(bows respectfully)
person HannaFO
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I also liked that playfull side tha Amos showed in this last chapter.
Then the news came on and i felt a lump in throat. I had hoped that he would go off easy, but alas:(
Well i cant wait for the next chapter :)
person zero
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story rocks i love how your progressing with the idea hope you update soon please
thanks for a wonderful read
person HannaFO
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad to have you back :)
I absolutly love Amos. His "Ill kick you ass" persona really gets to me.
Poor Ray, and even more poor Eddie. I cant wait to find out what happens.!
person ceedee
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ray, talk about life taking a truly abrupt turn- not just downhill but complete left turn-Hmmm Amos a rescuer.
person Perona
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay updates!! I hope Ray makes Amos' protection duties difficult *snicker* and maybe stirring up a little sexual tension? Can't wait for more
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
holy cow this is amazing!!!! Eddie can't die tho, he must live! I want some Eddie-luvin!!!!

Keep up the superb job, very excellent work!