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for The Hardest Path

by SholtoMaru

person wynja
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*grin* well... wherever you are going with it, I like it... I GUESS a certain someone is going to end up at that brothel (and... because I'm evil, I kinda hope it won't be all willingly) and, somewhere down the line, you will, naturally, let the familie's paths cross, somehow, but how you will do that I have no idea... and that's why I'm sitting here, longing for the next chapter... :O)
person J42
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes - and we're looking forward to where you're taking us. :D Thanks for the update!
person wynja
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, shite... the prostitution I expected (duh! since the end of the last chapter) but his mum going crazy TOO!? ARGH! THat was rough! Poor boy... *pets him* You are cruedl... but GOOD cruel... *grin* Keep it up!
person J42
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow - it is getting better! Thanks for sharing!
person wynja
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woooowwwww... oh, no need to be nice to him.. I like dark... it can turn as fluffy as it wants as long as it starts dark... *grin*
person Rin
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I hope his mom ends up being ok, thought I am not sure if it feels like she will. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Oh and you are welcome. I like looking up names soo.... yeah. Guess I have some thinking to do now. :)

P.s. Yea I can review here now. lol
person wynja
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo problem with dark and angsty... *leans back to enjoy the show* And I'm so glad you liked the names! I'm going to think about what I will wish for, but it's hard since I never got to wish for an original fic before... only fanfiction, and there the characters are "ready"... I'm very bi-polar though, I like both dark, non-con (have a thing for master/slave, actually.. don't look at me like that! ;o) ) but I also like fluffy and romantic... I like reality but also fantasy (have another thing about cat-boys, and- DON'T LOOK AT ME LIKE THAT!)... as long as it's slash, really... ;o) I'm thinking about writing an original story myself one day... I've only written fan fiction on FF.net so far, and I'm starting to feel like I'm up for the challenge...
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just found this story and so far I am into it. I can't wait to see how Nicholas deals with everything, and possibly one day discovering who his father is...not to mention what's been up with that clan in the last 12 years. So are you thinking about time jumping again or keeping Nicholas at this age?
person wynja
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know! I know! Bob!
*tries to look serious but breaks down*
Nooo... Sorry... ahhh... names.... hmmm... I like names like Duncan, Nicholas and so on, but since I'm Swedish... *tries to think of swedish names* Albin, Johan, Erik, Mikael, Carl, Daniel, Fredrik, Martin, Ulf (means wolf), Jonas, Thomas, Alexander, Mattias, Tommy... uhhh... Well... I'm not helping, am I... well, I hope you find something soon! And the wish-thing was sooo nice! But I'll wait to see where this is going first, like you recommended.. ;o)
person wynja
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*does a little happy dance* Yes! I guessed it! I'm the MA- I mean... GIRL... Yeah! ;o) Stupid English expressions... *mutters*
So get to the main story already! Time-jump! Time-jump! Time-jump! *grins* Oh, sorry... now I have harassed you as well... Ops. Should stop doing that, huh? ;o)