rate_review Reviews

Loved it as I'll tell you later. Loved the by play of chara and how you set up what you have planned to happen. I feel a little strange since I know what's gonna happen, but I the stories good enough that I'm still able to enjoy it. Since I pretty much know about 75 percent of what's in the future I'm able to sit back and relax and just enjoy they way the chara interact with each other. It's a new and fun way to read the story. I must say though that I believe that even if I didn't I would still enjoy it. I'll give you my more personal feelings in a sec on meebo.
Your slave Lexy.

*slaps the jerky snob around a bit* There! Just had to do that... *grin*. Will sit quietly and wait for the next chapter now, like a good girl.

I guess things are looking up...well at least he will be trained and not running around with no protection and such. I like the new set of characters introduced...they should be fun to read about...it seems as though they might get into their share of trouble at times. Can't wait for the next update!

It's coming along nicely and I like how your getting some of your mom frustration out on the page. Very theraputic. I love the harem your building and I just know that eventually 'Wine Boy' will change and more then likely because of his association with Nico.
Okay so I don't realy know how to review something but here goes. I love the world you are creating and the tragedy of his life is just remenisent enough of acheron to make me weep but different enough to keep me reading and interested in the next chapter.
It took a reeeeaaalllyyy long time to get going but I wouldn't change that at all because it was completely nessasary. With the complex chara that you have here you realy need to pace yourself and give yourself room to exspound. I have heard many people poo-poo Laurell K. about being to damn discriptive,but personally I find it to be genius because with that detail I end up feeling more connected to the chara which not only makes me like them but it also makes me love the story which keeps me reading.
Now for my wishes for the future.....Hmm well I like the naughty Telin so we have to have some more there. While I would love some incest as you knew I would it might be a bit much for casual readers. Soooo oh well. Um I'd like to know what happens with Daquiri even though she's a girl. Oh, and you need some hot love scenes eventually. I know it can be a bit embaressing and iky to create those scenes but come on. You've got this ready made harem to play with (The Four Gaurds) and it will be a tragedy on par with the end of Ruroni Kenshin 'Reflexion' if you don't. If you need any help with anything just let me know. As you know I'm a filthy dirty girl with mind and body made for sin. Talk to you laters.
Love your slave,
Lexy

Hi!
Oh, damn, he WILL have it tough... poor kid... well, at least he has some support now... I mean what could go wrong NOW? *thinks about it* ehh... a lot? Can't wait to read about it...

Thanks for the update and moving the story along! Glad that Nic (and Mum) is being taken care of. Glad Nic will be able to defend himself better - and also opens up the possibility of Nic's Mum letting the cat-of-bag to the Aunt via the doctor.

I found your story last night and stayed up reading it, I cant wai to see what happens to poor Nik, I hope though there is a good sceen in the future when his aunt (dads sis) finds out what she did. cant wait for the update

woooohh... interesting.... and males? In a SLASH story!?? It's unheard of! *grin* I'm eagerly avaiting future twists and turns...

Hey!
I just read your storie. Since I did not read your A/N at first, I was on the verge of abandonning it after the 2 First chapters. But it was well written so Iwent on even if it looked like het...I do not regret it : I loved it. So now I am waiting for the next update...rather eagerly...
bye
M

-grin- yeah, accents are fun, aren't they? Hmmm... can't wait to see how this brothel-deal will work out... and dark fluff? The best kind! ;o)