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Poor Nic - sheesh nice for a while then worse?- not even close to fair- and yes I KNOW life's not fair but he can at least get even odds cant he? And Aster & Eurus- better yet Nic's earstwhile sperm donor deserves a quick kick and Nic come out on top.

I just got caught up and I feel bad for Nik, his mom and dad, but hope they all recover and happy that Nik's off the street and made some friends

I figured out I really like Rhett, I don't think I like Laurel (I think that's how you spell it) Andrei seems to be a little prevert but other than the whole trying to get it on with a sleeping boy, he seems to be an ok guy. I can't wait to find out more about him. I'm excited to see what they will do for Nic's birthday. Poor baby, he deserves at least a good birthday especially if things are going to get worse for him. Great chapter. I am really enjoying this story. I hope you are feeling much better. And as always thanks for the update!

*grin* that lady is scarier than the guards! ;O)Oh, I'm still here and enjoying this story immensly, but I print the stuff I read, so I'm sorry if I'm late or miss reviews sometimes... it's a crazy busy world... ;o)

Telin seems a bit naughty...Nic better watch out for that one. Father and son come together and they didn't even know it...a little sad. I bet Liam would flip if he knew he just left his son to work at a brothel and possible service his own uncle...talk about complex family dynamics. Great chapter...again can't wait until your next update! Thanks!!!!!

Poor Nic. I keep reading wanting to see things get better for him. Rhett and the other guards/assassin etc might be able to give him a fighting chance.

YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH!!!!!!! Ahhh the beauty that is incest. Thanks for the kiss. You know I've been waiting with baited breath for it. Oh, and thanks for showing my fav chara ahain like I asked. GOD I LOVE PINN. So have to R.P. him soon. You promised. God he's just so Kawaii.
I guess I just have to catch him waxing his car huh? tehe.


Your slave Lexy
Your master Brax

I liked the chapter though not much happened. I have to admit that since I do know what's going to happen it's actually more exciting because now I have to wait for shit to happen. I can't wait for the thing with Telin and Liam. Oh and the thing with his aunt. Oooo I just can't wait. It's gonna be so good. I can't believe we spent so many hours talking about it tonight though. Well that and the Taka thing. I guess it's better then working. My fav thing though is knowing you're gonna use some of my ideas.....guess that's my control freek peeking over the wall ne? Meebo you in a sec.
Your slave Lexy
Your master Brax

I like this chapter. I got a little glimpse into the groups personalities, from their weapons choice. Although Aster seems to be the deadly one because he talks the talk and always threatening someone, I think Andrei might just be the real hard core deadly one. Not to mention the sexiest one. Great chapter, looking forward to the next one.

*grin* Toy box? Great name! Hey, I wanted to run something by you... just a tiny thing: the warnings at the start of the chapter... are they really needed? I mean, this is ADULT fan fiction... the reason is that I have had other stories/chapters completely ruined when the author puts in warning... I mean, if the 'shocker' of the chapter is, for example, rape or death, it ruins it to WARN people before hand... know what I mean? Think about it... trust me, I don't think there is much us readers can't handle... *grin*