rate_review Reviews

Admittedly your writing isn't perfect, but no one's ever starts out that way. The story is good, even though it's a little short, and you can always update at any time. I like your characters and I get the feeling that there might be some happiness in store for Nicole and Jesse. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Keep it up.

I'm really enjoying your story, I hope to see more soon.

Aww poor Nicole! but she handled it well though :( but still! how could he just ditch her to get drunk some night? he could have been with her instead of alone!!

Really nice job so far. The Sexual tension is thickening and I can't wait to se where this goes next. Keep up the good work.