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Stockholm Pizza. I imagine that would taste of rape. D; Lovely chapter. <33 Keep it up.

It pulled heartstrings. I literally found myself wanting to jump into the story and shoot Ol' Rosey in the face. I love the idea, no matter how disturbing it is, because in mob circles and things stuff like this probably really happens. Your story is kind of a window to how sick the real world can be, you know? Keep it up Aero!

hey, took a look at this story, and thought i'd tell you to keep it up. it's twisted, but it's interesting just to see how far reality can be warped. the characters are very realistic, and i love the way you portray them. o:
good job!

I like it so far but the whole Leolin situation has me reading it with a bit of hesitancy. I don't want to read and get to a point where you kill him or irreparably injure him. That is your perogative as the author I just don't like those kinds of stories because I get too disturbed.That's why I stay away from the angst and darkfic sections of the site. I can't stop myself from reading if I get close even though I get intolerably upset. I think I would like to see more of Elliot though because I don't have him figured out yet. I don't understand what he wants, what he know, how he is involved in the fates of the boys. I think I like Boomer because he is so gruffly protective but I don't know if I can forgive him yet for getting Don hooked on such a devastating drug.

Excellent story line! I'm enjoying it immensely! I'm on the edge waiting for more! I wish I could just jump into the action! The plot line is original and exciting. Great imagery! I feel like I am right there and can see everything in my head as though it were a movie! Keep up the excellent writing! Update soon! Don't leave a fan hanging!

This is a really good story, I would much enjoy it if you continued it. ^^

I like it so far,keep up the good work.

...O_____O;;; It's... good... and I obviously am a terrible, terrible person for enjoying it as much as I do. I really can't wait to see where it goes from here. My heart goes out to Donovan so, so much. <33 Keep writing, dear!!

thanks! lots of action - good start. looking forward to more. ;-)