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Oh dear god, poooooooooooor guys!!! TT______TT

I hope they make it through this! ;; I REALLY don't want them to get caught! 'cause I don't know what I'll do... ><

Anyways, I hope they keep running! And get to a safe place (or as safe is it can be).

Thanks for the update! *hugs*

Oh, you just LOVED putting that cliffhanger in there, I can tell. :P But seriously, this story gets me excited every time I read a new chapter. I really adore Don and Leo. Also, I thought of Leo in my linguistics class today; we were learning about signed languages, and they mentioned a bit about how blind people can feel and understand signed languages.

You really know how to write out these action scenes very well. Like, my eyes stopped moving along the line of text once Rosey appeared in the doors because I was so afraid for the two of them. It was almost like I was afraid to read further because I feared for their lives. I also love how often Don swears; since it was something he grew up with, it's second nature to him to curse in his every day speech, but it's still always fun to see "Fuck fuck fuck fuck" written in his thoughts.

Looking forward to more! (And hoping Rosey dies because, as autopsies reveal, he has no heart with which to pump blood. :P)

Excellent. I absolutely adore the escape plans and Boomer is most certainly growing on me further. Also, Barret. That is all. Love ya Aero. xD

Ohhh ...

please update soon! I can't guess what gonna happen but I hope they don't get injured that bad! Let me see, the truck will hit them, some injuries, getting unconscious, waking up in boss apartment again! Ohhhh maybe he becomes a pet too! :P

Well update sooonnnn! I can't wait to see what happen! :D

Hello,

I just finished reading 10 chapters back to back after a few hours! and I have to say: wow, that was awsome!! :D the story, the characters, ... everything!

I just don't know how to wait until you upload again!?!?

Just tell me how did Leo get blind?! I really want to know! It's so cruel that he can't see his twin after all these years! but I'm thinking, assuming they can scape, where are they gonna go?! they would be found so soon?! and then what? and what's gonna happen to Boomer???

And the girl!!!!!!! is I were Don, I would have killed her! :D

Well, thanks for sharing and please update soon! ;)

I have to say, I almost didn't read this story because of the title, but I'm glad I did. The story is getting me so wrapped. There is abuse and then there is Leolin's case. How can a guy sleep with anyone so long and care so littel for them? Most people care for animals more. I'm not really fussed if Leolin and Dom die or get free so long as Leolin sees that Rosencroft really doenst care about him and Rosencroft gets what he deserves...a mroal victory so to speak ><....poor Leolin

Oh god... To answer ur question about the brat, I'd probably kill myself in Elliot's place! ;;

She's a pure living nightmare!!! X____X ...just like her father!

Jezz. I can't wait to see how they'll get out of there!

And I just wanna make sure, is Leolin both blind and mute? poor guy... *sniff*

Anyways, great chapter! And I don't mind that there's no sex 'cause I really hate Elliot! I can't stand him fucking Leo!! grrr

Kay. It's offical. I hate Rosey. Badbad. I really want to smack him. On a side note, your writing it total win! Keep it up! (Let's play some tetris mofo.) xDD

>8-O Where is moar!

Oh god... just like u said, that 'man' is a demon! Hell! I hate him sooo much! I hope he pays for what he's done! >< grr

Anyways, I like were this is going! I'm sure he'll find a way to help out his twin! *sniff*

GET him outta there!!! >__<