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June 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Will you go on writing and updating?
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March 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm worry about the twins.Will they escape? Why don't you continue ?Please don't be cruel to your readers. I know its been a long time since your last update but finish it, please？
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November 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i really really love this story and i am dieing to know if you will continue with it...i really really hope you do and i really hope it is soon!!!! please continue the story i really ant wait foe more.!!!
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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
moar plz
kthx
kthx
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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!11one. I DEMAND MORE!!! It is incredible! Who is that guy who look Leo!? BLARGH!! Is Boomer okay?! Waiting is killing me!
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November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mary!xD ilu.
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November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! As good as ever! I can't wait for the next part... probably because I have knowledge into it. XD Well written and it made me panic! Well done!
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November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, what can I say? Very, very hard hitting. I found it difficult to read at points as it made me emotional. It's a exceedingly in depth and well thought out piece. I truly adore it. Of course, there were typos but it happens.
My favourite character, by far, is Leolin. I sympathise with Donovan for all the work he's putting in, trying to save Leolin.
The scenes of tw-incest were very well handled. The disgust put across by Donovan was obvious and it was difficult to read without getting emotional. I certainly applaud the author for the tactful approach to it. Well done!!
As far as story structure goes, it's well made, it's easy to follow, and I enjoyed it immensely. The writing is inteligent and emotional. It has depth and raw feelings in it that you can almost feel.
I hate the end. Well, that's because I hate cliffhangers, for their sole purpose. It was incredibly written but I personally dislike cliffhangers, I hate being made to wait for such well written work.
I have nothing more to say, really, except that I thouroughly enjoyed every minute of it.
My favourite character, by far, is Leolin. I sympathise with Donovan for all the work he's putting in, trying to save Leolin.
The scenes of tw-incest were very well handled. The disgust put across by Donovan was obvious and it was difficult to read without getting emotional. I certainly applaud the author for the tactful approach to it. Well done!!
As far as story structure goes, it's well made, it's easy to follow, and I enjoyed it immensely. The writing is inteligent and emotional. It has depth and raw feelings in it that you can almost feel.
I hate the end. Well, that's because I hate cliffhangers, for their sole purpose. It was incredibly written but I personally dislike cliffhangers, I hate being made to wait for such well written work.
I have nothing more to say, really, except that I thouroughly enjoyed every minute of it.
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November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Such a good chapter! I loved how Donovan's teenage hormones were so in control when they were at the diner. It was a bit of lightness to soften the mood. It was well written, as usual, and I enjoyed it thoroughly. The part where Donovan shot Frank was sad and I liked the slight role reversal as Leolin picked Donovan up for once. I can't wait for the next part! This is definitely getting addictive.
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November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It is very exciting right now. Can't wait for the rest ^^