rate_review Reviews

The sex seemed... So... Naughty.
The whole situation between the two of them came across as soft and intimate and on the one hand I'm thinking 'WTF? You shouldn't be DOING this' but on the other hand... It's turned into a puddle of goo and doesn't care anymore if it's bad.
I shall wait, with my one angry hand and the other puddle of goo, for the next chapter.

Lol, I like Honey Nut Cheerios and Fruit Loops! You sure do love your cliff hangers. Hopefully, I will get to see Baslin's reaction to those two.

I can't wait for an update!!!!
So I really hope Soren isn't going to break up Balin and Brett.
Can't wait for Balin and Soren to be face to face.
Are they going to tell Balin how they were together behind his back?
Well Tuesday couldn't come fast enough, but i will wait lol

I'm loving this story! I can't wait to find out why Balin got arrested, and generally what all is gonna happen!

All right, so I'm following the steps.
First of all, I really like your story from the beginning. When I started reading about Brett's Monster coming to him and fucking him even against his will, I sort of hoped and maybe suspected that it will eventually turn into a romance between them (and I was happy when Brett started to enjoy the sex). You see, I always like a good written romantic story with a lot of smut. (M/M preferably ;))
I like both Brett and Balin, I was afraid that maybe Brett would go to Logan a the beginning, but thankfully he stayed with Monster. When you wrote this chapter about Brett's parents not caring about him and his father being a homophobe it was really moving and sad.
I thought that the moment Brett said „You will be happy forever” to his Monster was the cutest part of all story *_*
I must admit that still some things about monster world seem a mystery to me, but maybe if i re-read some chapters about it, things will become clearer to me.
I would prefer my own monster to be a little hairy, but still I prefer Balin for Brett, not Soren :( I really hope that Brett will not choose Soren over Balin or something. That he will realize he wants only Balin :( If Brett is Balin's only one, his „Timsal Es”, right, shouldn't they be together?
I also want to say that I really enjoy the smut scenes you write, I think they are very good. Hope to see more!
I will send you an e-mail later so maybe I could also see the extra chapter. (I don't have a facebook account)

I feel like I missed something? Which.. Is quite possible, really. Why is Balin being arrested? I want to know NOW. Also... I want a pet mango for christmas, please.

Oh, no! What a cliffhanger! Then I'll have to check out AFF on the next update-day! YAY!!!!
Seriously, I am looooooving this story! Totally Hooked ^O^ And I really like the word Atmatos... It's really cool but kind of - I don't know - foreboding as well(?) I'll just have to wait and figure out what it actually means xD
Thanx a bunch! ^^ I'm glad you're liking them, though they (as in not Grey) are on a little hiatus! :)
Though, I must admit, every time I see your name (or a regular Viking ship by the harbor nearby), I get a little defensive... about my candy... xD But now I've moved on to cookies! HAHA!!!!!!!!!! (Slightly hysterical laugh while trying to eat all the cookies at once) ^^
See y'around! Am totally going on Facebook to read that promised smut ;3

I don't have any specific words to describe how many questions you packed into this cliffhanger but I have a lot of them...XD

I don't understand how that happened... How it was allowed to happen... But I'm not unhappy it did. I wonder if it would have still happened if he'd have known it was Soren. Maybe he only enjoyed it so much because he didn't know that, but hey, Soren was nice. He has to be given some credit...

Huhuhu ! Another cliff... Bad, bad writer ! ;P
Is it because of Soren ? Maybe he wants the boy for him alone... O.o
Thanks for the fast update.