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for The Monster Under My Bed

by eroburn

schedule September 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story. I must say though, I never thought I would read something like this but I'm glad that I did. I'm enjoying this plot waaayyy too much. And the easter egg was really something. Very eye popping to say the least. even though they were stand alone snipets. I love this story. Keep it up :)
person iriskzk1
schedule September 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Dang,it's gonna be hard for him without Baslin for 2 years....I hope they change their minds.
schedule September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was crazy.
I feel so bad for Balin. I wonder if he's that one who said what's goin to be in ch 15
I cant wait for the next chapter and for them to go back to Earth.
Wonder how that will be.
Post more ASAP :D


P.s. condolences for you uncle
person Ri-chan...
schedule September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Pufff.. the cupcakes of the AU were..OoO...and really strong, but I love the way you manage the history so far...

Thank you for sending them..
person anu
schedule September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
epic cliffhanger = ending + preview quote
person kittyloveranime
schedule September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i really loved your easter egg it really moved me and i will treasure it forever
schedule September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh I liked the easter egg :D
Can't wait for you to post another chapter here though.
Post more soooooooon please!!!!!
:D
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!
I only updated now because I read half of the chapter before giving up a few days ago - when I was hung-over (that's the reason! Your story is fantastic!!!) so...... But I really liked it - and of course I will be looking forward to the next update, so I can find out what happens next!
I like the plot tightening in with Balin imprisoned and what-not - really you're making me addicted!!!!!! ^^
Aww, it's so sad for Elfy and his lost mate - that's what Atmatos meant... <'3
I really liked the emotions you displayed in this chapter, it was a wonderful read :D

Well, until next update! ^^
person mymadlovebird
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I lerk I never review but for u for this I will. cant wait to go back and read more of the easter egg chapter. I stoped just to come over and say please keep going. I need smut to stay sane.
person norikko
schedule September 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've read your latest chapter, and it's getting more interesting by the minute. Humhumhum, am I thinking correctly? A new twist and possibly a new pairing (Logan & the elfy lol), wondering if Balin was arrested because the council found their enemy's item under his shirt (that hamsa necklace? o.O). All in all, it's getting more exciting and I can't wait for the next chapter XDD!! Oh, almost forget, the monster's picture is gorgeous, it makes me drooling hehehe..