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oh no balin!!! things are heating up

lol it's all good.
What is Soran trying to get at?
Is he trying to make Brett his new mate or something?
I want Balin to come back!!!!
I'm glad that Brett isn't just find and dandy with everything that's happening, he needs to realize how important Balin is!

I almost had a heart attack too when AFF wasn't working!

But post more sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

I liked this chapter and I really want to be on Soren's side but he just seems guilty. Can't wait for the next chapter. Lol, I would ask for some but I don't like alfredo....or mayo or ranch dressing or pretty much anything that looks like alfredo sauce ( I'm weird, I know) . I had a panic attack when AFF stopped working. I just stared at the computer and then kept trying evey couple of hours until I saw it was back.

Omg why such a short chapter??? And I thought you said you updated every sat! I am so entranced with this story. I dunno I get such a weird feeling of deja vu when I read it. Was this posted somewhere around 8 years ago somewhere else? It seems so familiar.


Anywho, I hope the next chapter is long and comes out soon :)

Poor Balin, I hope he can be together with Brett when they return to Earth T^T...or much better if Balin can spend his exile with Brett together on earth
The special chapter had given me a bit understanding of Brett's motive for attempting suicide although it's rather dark for me :( <---thx for the super special chapter, it's wonderful!!

Anyway, I hope this story will have a very happy ending for Balin, Brett, and Soren, so more new chapters pleaseee.....

continuing <<---thx for the super special chapter, it's wonderful!!

Anyway, I hope this story will have a very happy ending for Balin, Brett, and Soren, so more new chapters pleaseee.....

i loved this chapter so much came to light. i cant wait for more i loved this and i love that i now have a chapter to my own to read forever

NOOOOOO! THEY JUST MET EACH OTHER AGAIN!!!!
I feel so bad for Brett and Balin!!! I really hope they will find out a way to be together again and that they will make up (make up sex is always delicious) xD
Liked the chapter - Really awesome with the council and how important Brett has become ^^

I feel for Balin. I know he went about things in a rather odd way to begin with, what with all the less than consensual sexing going on... But it has become clear that he's got a heart in there somehwere and that heart appears to have just been broken.
But what about Soren? What's he going to do? I believe he has feelings for Brett. Everything points in that direction: calling them lovers, the hurt looks, the repeated sex as if to comfort Brett, and, my favourite: “I’m sorry that I thought you truly wanted me. I don’t know how I could have thought that anyone would want an Atmatos like me. I am so sorry that I presumed. I had hoped that you would accept me, but it isn’t to be.” <- surely he's not allowed to just hump Brett whenever he feels like it... right? I mean, Brett is with Balin officially still?
But I like Soren.
But I like Balin.
Make the pouty faces go away! They torment me.

I am truly sorry for your loss (your uncle). Peace to your family.