rate_review Reviews

::does happy dance:: New chapter! :D I loved it! I love (insert main characters name here) style of dress! And his attitude is awesome XD Sneering is so fun. I hope 'soon' means like, next chapter? :P I wonder if Logan is going to figure out about the monster under the bed. The monster is like an evil spirit, following (insert main characters name here) around. Very interesting. I'm really loving this story! Things do feel a bit rushed, but I have a feeling that was just kind of a 'set up' so we understand (insert main characters name here) life better. :) I really love your story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

oh this is new i love it though i do wish the chapters were longer, a little disappointed when i reached the last chapter i was like oh where the next one TT_TT but besides that a very interesting story that i would love to see more of s i do hope to see another update soon. ^_^

....i don't know how i feel about this chapter, it made me feel like it was too much the filler. But i can't wait for the next, nonetheless.

Yay! It's not a oneshot anymore!!
^___^

I love it so far! Lol. Please write more soon.

Ummm....UPDATE NOW
This chapter iswonderful and i NEED to read the next one. VERY NICE

XD Yes, do add more. I want to know what the Monster is saying!

That was actually very good! I definitly don't think you should leave it as a one-shot. Its very creative, just taking the old 'monster under my bed' and putting a new spin on it. It feels a little rushed though, as if the poor boy is trying to tell his life story in five hundred words or less :)

I really did like it, and I wouldn't mind a story made out of it just one bit! Very nice job, keep it coming :)

in theory i would have liked this. but it kinda seems strange that all of a sudden the monster stopped raping him and like i dunno it seems like it was trying to mate with him or something. also most people know what fucking raw means. you probably didn't need to explian it.

something else....

i did think it was a good start. maybe if you rewrote it and made it a little longer?