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October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15
Yes, earth really is the place of pain and sorrow.
The comment on smelling of another, I like. People don't pick up on scent so much for whatever reason but in my opinion it's important.. And sexy. I like smelling people. Guys, mainly... and smelling of them. Some people smell fucking amazing.
'I walked away.' Gives strong emotion. I lke it.
The end touches on something so sad. He wants to go back home, to the world that is horrible. It's almost like he wants to go back to punish himself.
Yes, earth really is the place of pain and sorrow.
The comment on smelling of another, I like. People don't pick up on scent so much for whatever reason but in my opinion it's important.. And sexy. I like smelling people. Guys, mainly... and smelling of them. Some people smell fucking amazing.
'I walked away.' Gives strong emotion. I lke it.
The end touches on something so sad. He wants to go back home, to the world that is horrible. It's almost like he wants to go back to punish himself.
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October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17
“Of course I love him.” I close my eyes. “But I still want you. And I hate you.” I closed my eyes. I couldn’t look at him while I talked. <- you like writing about my life, eh?
I like the word rendezvous. Try saying that when you're off your rocker.
Balin should really put on some clothes at some point. Bits might get chilly. But seriously?! NO! Don't leave him anymore!
“Of course I love him.” I close my eyes. “But I still want you. And I hate you.” I closed my eyes. I couldn’t look at him while I talked. <- you like writing about my life, eh?
I like the word rendezvous. Try saying that when you're off your rocker.
Balin should really put on some clothes at some point. Bits might get chilly. But seriously?! NO! Don't leave him anymore!
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October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Because aff chops my reviews like a pro:
“Of course I love him.” I close my eyes. “But I still want you. And I hate you.” I closed my eyes. I couldn’t look at him while I talked. <- you like writing about my life, eh?
I like the word rendezvous. Try saying that when you're off your rocker.
Balin should really put on some clothes at some point. Bits might get chilly. But seriously?! NO! Don't leave him anymore!
“Of course I love him.” I close my eyes. “But I still want you. And I hate you.” I closed my eyes. I couldn’t look at him while I talked. <- you like writing about my life, eh?
I like the word rendezvous. Try saying that when you're off your rocker.
Balin should really put on some clothes at some point. Bits might get chilly. But seriously?! NO! Don't leave him anymore!
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October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
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Something hates me and won't let me send what I want so just know that what I was trying to say was that the first sentences sound like... Something I'd get myself into. And I understand his pain.
How he begs Balin to never leave him breaks my heart.. But then my mind backtracks to the fact that he's naked right then and I burst into giggles... And then heartbreak. And back to giggles.
The biting is good. I like biting. Like... Gentle biting and sucking and mouthing and gnawing and clawing. All good to my frazzled mind.
Something hates me and won't let me send what I want so just know that what I was trying to say was that the first sentences sound like... Something I'd get myself into. And I understand his pain.
How he begs Balin to never leave him breaks my heart.. But then my mind backtracks to the fact that he's naked right then and I burst into giggles... And then heartbreak. And back to giggles.
The biting is good. I like biting. Like... Gentle biting and sucking and mouthing and gnawing and clawing. All good to my frazzled mind.
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October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
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Everyone should be afraid of squirrels. Honest to god. You don't come between a squirrel and its nuts.
Balin really did screw up with his whole 'hi, can we be together' chat. I think he went the wrong way right around the time he started acting creepy... Which was right at the damn start. But, ya know what they say... Everyone deserves a second chance and all that.
I need to write porn with growling involved. His growling is good (in my head)
Nah, baby. Don't bring the human back. We don't need him!
Everyone should be afraid of squirrels. Honest to god. You don't come between a squirrel and its nuts.
Balin really did screw up with his whole 'hi, can we be together' chat. I think he went the wrong way right around the time he started acting creepy... Which was right at the damn start. But, ya know what they say... Everyone deserves a second chance and all that.
I need to write porn with growling involved. His growling is good (in my head)
Nah, baby. Don't bring the human back. We don't need him!
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October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
so, the virus allows self harm in that situation? I would think that those strong enough to carry on without their mate, despite the sorrow, would be up held and supported, rather than shunted aside as discarded... but then i'm only human. :P
okay, thats... odd. what in the world has he done to get himself arrested?! neh, they can get the kid a fortune in a heart beat, but they can't track down through computer records any sibling he might have? Or he just didn't think of asking.
looks like Earthlings are re writing a lot of previously established virus rules, neh? I hope they find Soren's new mate. He deserves something.
okay, thats... odd. what in the world has he done to get himself arrested?! neh, they can get the kid a fortune in a heart beat, but they can't track down through computer records any sibling he might have? Or he just didn't think of asking.
looks like Earthlings are re writing a lot of previously established virus rules, neh? I hope they find Soren's new mate. He deserves something.
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October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
NO NO NO you cant stop there . going back to the last chapter. Thanks for lettting us know whats up with is two monsters . Cant wait for the next chappy. :)
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October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
aww, it seems there's hope for Soren in finding his mate again T^T...still, cannot shake the thought of having Logan as his mate later on kekeke...
or perhaps there will be a new character making a new appearances? It will certainly add another twists to the story so far.
All in all, I wish Soren, Logan, Brett and Balin can all be happy in the end. I'll root for them!
(btw, how come my review is listed under a different name o_0 ? What a strange site!)
or perhaps there will be a new character making a new appearances? It will certainly add another twists to the story so far.
All in all, I wish Soren, Logan, Brett and Balin can all be happy in the end. I'll root for them!
(btw, how come my review is listed under a different name o_0 ? What a strange site!)
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October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the virus info. Now to my reviewing.....What in the world is he getting arrested for?!?!? Maybe they will realize that they made a mistake and let him go or Balin and Soren will poof in and just take him. Also, I was wondering if we were going to see Logan again.
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October 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmmmm I'm not really seeing Soren as that evil of a guy. I mean wouldn't Balin know and warn Brett that Soren had evil intentions? Also, there wAs only 1 update this week! I saw wut u did thar -_- you sly tricky tricky