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for The Monster Under My Bed

by eroburn

person Anon
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
creepy but interesting
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww..poor little guy...he has no friends! I wonder if logan will find out about the monster, It will sort be interesting if he does. Anyways, you did a great job on this chapter, so keep up the good work. I cna' wait to read your next chapter! 8D
person nanase08
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
im confused... plz explain.
person drutto
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was quite interesting, actually. I'd love to see more. So far so good.
person Elken
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read the first two chapters of your story and it caught my interest. So far I like it. It made me very curious about the monster. What's his reason for doing him? Actually I want to know about both of them.

I'm eagerly waiting for more. ^__^
person coco
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MAN THIS IS SO COOL.
This is like.. the first of its kind. Such a unique one! xD I can't wait til the plot develops. I'm certainly going to be a dedicated reader of yours. <3
person candy
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i read the one shot before you decided to expand the story and i'm so glad you did! this has a lot of potential and i like the direction you're going in. can't wait for the next chapters. :)
person navajo
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story its interesting, im really curious what the "monster" is and why it choose him and what exactly it has planned. I also real curious about logan, does he have a thing for him (i dont remember his name or did you give him a name?) cant wait for more
person Reso
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes! You updated! Thank you very much, I was having a crappy day until I came across this brilliant gem. Make my week and update again soon?
person bossy_foodshield
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
not bad not bad... i'm enjoying this story quite a bit :)