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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
D: update xP
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July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting plot, I wonder what happened with the understanding his language.
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July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved your other two stories and this one is just as good. I hope you continue to update!
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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting!! I'm glad you didn't leave this as a oneshot since you've developed Brent (or was it Bret?) into a different personality than i originally picked up on! hhaha can't wait to read more :)
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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
looking forward to what's going to happen next.
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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I quite like this story. What an interesting and sexy twist on the monsters we always used to supposedly imagine. But this monster has a different agenda than creeping you out, it wants to fuck you! And you're not even five anymore, so why does it haunt you?
Yeah. That's why I like this plot. It's very interesting. Logan's a weird guy. Maybe he has a crush on our poor, confused boy? Wouldn't that make the monster mad. I can't wait to see more. Very captivating tale.
Yeah. That's why I like this plot. It's very interesting. Logan's a weird guy. Maybe he has a crush on our poor, confused boy? Wouldn't that make the monster mad. I can't wait to see more. Very captivating tale.
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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DUDE!!! this guy sounds like me kinda scary almost. pardon the fact that i'm a girl (who dosen't get raped by the monster under my bed) and i'm a helluva lot friendlier. what got me most was the apple thing. i eat an apple every day for breakfast.
u fucking nailed my mother, 2.
please continue the story, i liiiiiiike it. ^.^
u fucking nailed my mother, 2.
please continue the story, i liiiiiiike it. ^.^
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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Please update asap!
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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i was sooo confused...i thought id read da story but then i thought chapter 2 was completely different and then chapter 1 had changed and finally my slow mind figured out whats going on. lol
im glad your making this story longer...it had a lot of potential so yes, more detail is excellent.
update soon!
im glad your making this story longer...it had a lot of potential so yes, more detail is excellent.
update soon!
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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DUDE how original is this story! I love it man, foreal I havent read anything original in forever and this brightend my whore week hell my whole year! Keep up the good work this I KNOW is a promissing story!