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September 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just letting you know about your AN...aff.net is a nazi and mods see you bribing people for reviews they are going to send you a warning. Even saying something like "won't update unless I get a review" is grounds for a warning. it's that brutal here. maybe just ask people to e-mail you or get on an e-mail list to get access to the hidden chapter is good, but not bribing for reviews on aff.net itself.
other than that can't wait to see soren get beat up by the blue guy ;D
other than that can't wait to see soren get beat up by the blue guy ;D
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September 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!! GREAT chapter ^O^
It's Soren, LOL! Can't wait to see what happens next xD
It's Soren, LOL! Can't wait to see what happens next xD
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September 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was wonderful and a huge turning point for Brett and his Monster.
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August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God!!! What is Balin gonna do when he finds out about that!
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August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was not expecting that lol. Where's Balin?!?! Please keep up the good work and update soon. :)
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August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
nicely written, although this is unbeta'd, there was little to no grammar mistakes. and Soren is such a sneaky bastard, lol. can't wait for Balin's reactions to all this, keep it up!
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August 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I want whatever Brett's havin', 'cause god it sounds good. But I feel so much pity for him. It's like he's seen as the spokesperson for humans. He's just one guy. And somehow, magically, a new (ANOTHER) story idea came into my head because of one sentence in this chapter. Damn you. Now I have even more to write!
Out of curiosity, how many chapters total are there?
Out of curiosity, how many chapters total are there?
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August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
HIP-HIP-HOORAY! New Chapter! :)
Well, altho there were no smut in this chap. It was still a great
chap. because you gave us the details of how Monstertopia would look like,
and talked more about other type of monsters that lives in Monstertopia, and
that's an important piece of writing that should be included in every writings
out there
Well then, I can't wait for ch. 11's SMUTS >:)
@alinna-words, "and because of stupid nectarines" what's this about hahah?
Well, altho there were no smut in this chap.
chap. because you gave us the details of how Monstertopia would look like,
and talked more about other type of monsters that lives in Monstertopia, and
that's an important piece of writing that should be included in every writings
out there
Well then, I can't wait for ch. 11's SMUTS >:)
@alinna-words, "and because of stupid nectarines" what's this about hahah?
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August 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've been stalking this since the 4th chapter and just now decided that I love this enough to make an account here :3
looking forward for more! <3
looking forward for more! <3
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August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Was about to head to bed, but I checked, and then there's an update!
So I just had to finish it, the smut was good, as always :} Thank you.
And idc about the Kutsal, give me more SMUT!
Hahaha, just joking. But the Kutsal is a great addition to the story,
it adds more... what do you call it, suspense? excitement? anticipation?
to the story. I like it!
So I just had to finish it, the smut was good, as always :} Thank you.
And idc about the Kutsal, give me more SMUT!
Hahaha, just joking. But the Kutsal is a great addition to the story,
it adds more... what do you call it, suspense? excitement? anticipation?
to the story. I like it!