rate_review Reviews

Not sorry I started reading THIS one... *grin* It's really hot, and you do the 1st person POV very well from both brothers... interesting to change it like that... keep it up!

Yay, another chapter! 8D...lol, I loved the ending where Tran ask if Martin is gonna have sex with him or not. Thnx for writing more, I can't wait to read your next chapter! Keep up the good work, you're doing a great job. 8D

More Please...
This story is soooo damned hot!!!
I love your characters and how react to each other.
And I agree changing the POV was a stroke of genius. Now we see things from both brothers' eyes.

I can't wait to read more...

BCM

;B I know right? Isn't my name crazy-hard? I'm surprised I can even log in to anything using this damn name, hahah~ anyway, I just couldn't get enough of this! I had to read the chapter over and over again to realize that it ended right there 8P And my was face eerily close to my monitor by the end of it all. I'm extremely happy that you updated so fast! Not to mention it's as great as the first (if not better because of the smextastic smut...eheh, I dunno how to make up words). But what I've really got to say is that I love the line Tran came back with at the end, I just don't want to say it because I'll wear it out.

so thanks for the update and I'll [hopefully not] die of happiness with the next installment.

ps-pineapple juice? really! I never would've thought it ;D I love you Tran, you totally rock Martin's world~~

omg that was HOT!!!
yes, AMAZING :D
and yes this does mean that you must do a part 3!!!
only if you REALLY want too though...
*crosses fingers*

This story is HOT! Please continue and update.

MORE! I LOVE IT! please please don't stop here!! despite the fact that i'm not usually into incest, this is well written and amazingly fun :D it would be interesting to read in the older bro's point of view but as long as you continue this story i'll be one happy reader (it's too good for it to be just a one shot!) Looking forward to more of your stories, i'm going to go and read After the Fall now ;)

Wow, absoloutely love this. Hope you continue.

PLEASE do a second part!!
because this first part was amazing :)

I really hope you're going to continue! I love the description of the fights between the brothers... Maybe you could do something when they're older? I love the start, the tension was awesome, and I really want to read more. Thanks!