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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Just wonderful... such a cute couple really~~
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice endding
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Splendiforous 8D that's a hella cool word! I actually had to copy and paste it, hahaha
:3 The room seemed to become hotter while I read this. And when I came down from the high that is your story, I laughed so hard at their little kitchen predicament. Oh~, even if it's just an exaggeration: I will forever love you for writing this.
Thanks!
:3 The room seemed to become hotter while I read this. And when I came down from the high that is your story, I laughed so hard at their little kitchen predicament. Oh~, even if it's just an exaggeration: I will forever love you for writing this.
Thanks!
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol yeah, it is!
that was smokin hot!
my stomach ahd butterflys!
that was smokin hot!
my stomach ahd butterflys!
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa ... honestly, I was never really into incest but damn... You made it work for me LOL... I love it! I can;t help but find it endearing and its so sweet~~ love the way you write. more please~
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was extrememly hot!
I can't wait for the next part!!!
I can't wait for the next part!!!
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Push Jill down the hill and wave...lol. One of the
best lines ever. Thats going in my top ten, for certain.
In its entirety, I did enjoy it. I loved Tran's fiery wit in
the first chapter. He's such a likeable character. I liked
Martin too, but not as much as Tran.
N.B. I kept imagining Martin from Without a Trace.
Any connections there.
Continue plz.
Loads of encouragement to you.
~WR
best lines ever. Thats going in my top ten, for certain.
In its entirety, I did enjoy it. I loved Tran's fiery wit in
the first chapter. He's such a likeable character. I liked
Martin too, but not as much as Tran.
N.B. I kept imagining Martin from Without a Trace.
Any connections there.
Continue plz.
Loads of encouragement to you.
~WR
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooooh - and I'm so glad I came in now, when I get to read 2 chapters at once, yum!
Very nice, and I do enjoy Tran so much - he's adorable.
Very nice, and I do enjoy Tran so much - he's adorable.
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
waiting for part 111
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July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this, again. Story's absoloutely fabulous, and I love your characters :D