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Damn sexy story. Yum. Xoxo Robin

GAH! that was hot...i'd like to trade my brother for tran or martin ^.^ .. or both :D

I REALLY enjoyed this incest fic. It was probably one of the best ones I have read on adultfanfiction though too short :( I really wanted more~!
I liked that you didn't really focus on the idea of incest being 'wrong' because many authors who did/do write incest only list down the negativities of engaging in an incest relationship and don't explore the idea that incest can be appreicated like many other things in our world. Besides, I believe that incest can create on of the most beautiful relationships ever. I mean to accept a person for all of his/hers faults, all of the ugliness one suffers from is amazing to me. I understand that there are taboos against it and society doesn't accept it but it doesn't mean that it is wrong.
Once again I really had a blast reading this because it was a light-heart felt piece and I can't wait to read 'The Milk Stud', cheers~!

This entire story was delicious. XD

*drool* OH MY FUCKING GOD!! This was like....so Fucking awesome. I was totally wetting my seat ;) I mean talk about sexy and HOT HOT HOT!!!! Jeeze you're good...hope to see more from you cuz if it's anything like this I think I can die happy (and satisfied lol). Keep up the totally stunning work.

I'm in love with this story! Martin and Tran are adorable in the bratty kind of way. Those two insecure boys. I love their characterization. Especially Tran he's so foul mouthed and his P.O.V are just that great. He's so sarcastic that the only person that can tolerate him and accept his personality is Martin. And Martin he's no angel! he has loved Tran for such a long time! which is a feat he controlled his hormones.

Glad to know that Tran saved himself for Martin, that's what makes him lovable and I loved the way the humor was incorporated in this steamy story. I was laughing in part III on the whole don't "Don’t let your mouth write a check that your ass can’t cash" I wonder if that will occur constantly in Tran's case from now on.

Overall great original story and I honestly hope that there will be a sequel to see how the boys are doing.

Loved it. Your writing style is refreshing. This has got to be one of the hottest stories I read in a long time. Thank you for sharing, and I hope to read more from you soon.

aww, i loved this. a very enjoyable read, not to mention well written.perfect. i hope you're planning to write more fics. ^_^

OMG...That's it... This is going into my top ten. Hands down.
I applaud you. The ending was perfect, it just tied everything together.
It was Smart. Well-written. Well paced. Beautiful. Beautiful.

A job well done.Damn well done.
~WR

Great story! Loved it, and I'm sorry that it's over, but it was a good place to end it so I won't complain too loudly... This was a hot chapter, but it was funny as well... good work!