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May 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i would love to see where this story goes :) it is awesome so far and i would love to read more
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i hope you will write more soon. this is a very interesting story. you gave us just enough to get us hooked.
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July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You've got a very good story going on.
Just try keeping a good eye on the tenses.. you kinda blend past and present :D
Anyhwo can't wait for the next chapter :D
Just try keeping a good eye on the tenses.. you kinda blend past and present :D
Anyhwo can't wait for the next chapter :D