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omg i love the sequel and i cant wait for the next chapter! you are such an amzing writer i love all of your stuff

Ah you are amazing! Hurry up, update! Who cares about Grant?! DOMINICK!!!!

why such a short chapter? update soon

You "kinda" feel bad for Grant????? Why the hell would you????? No offense, but the smut scene between Autumn and Grant sucked (though not because of your writing - which is very good). I got the impression that she had no strong emotions (i.e. love, lust, etc.) for him, and he seemed to be using her just to get off. At this point, I seriously hope that Dominick puts a little spice/sparkle/EXPLOSION in their relationship. As for the little kid... I somehow can't see Dominick as having a child without Autumn. I think it would be more in character if the child was a family member who ended up an orphan or some type of 'Dominick to the rescue' situation, particularly as he seems to be the kind of person to do that. I kinda want to see this story end up with Dominick welcoming his *first* child into the world with Autumn. I'm not trying to put ideas into your head. I look forward to the next chapter to see how the party plays out and how you will portray Dominick - I doubt you'd be able to disappoint me, no matter what you come up with! :)

your chapters are way too short, but beautifully written nonetheless. hopefully we get a longer chap next time! and yes! dominick is here!

Don't be. She belongs with Dom. ^__^ xD and who is the kid???? <3 more please!~

I'm Soooooooooooooooooooooooo glad that its Dom who is the new tenant. I had a feeling it was him. I could barely stand to read the grant smut becuz i love dom so much. OOOOOOOh and now he has a baby. Faster plz I need to know watz going on

OMG YES!!! OMG A BABY!!!!!!!?????? *dies* okay I'm back. Did I mention yet what a great writer you are? This is gonna be good. *sits back and watches*

i kinda guessed that but still! lol who's the mom1?!?! where is she? him being a single dad makes him soo hot lol, and don't worry about grant i don't really like his character anyway lol XD

Aww :( i feel bad for Grant too but I LOVE DOMINICK! lol and i really wanna know why he ran out on her after he slept with her too... and if thats really his kid!! so i hope you update soon :D im lovin it