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for How and When

by limegreenandtangerine

person Rosei
schedule December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lime Green and Tangerine!!!!!

This is still a great story!!!!!

This is my yearly, "Wishing you two a HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!"
greeting!!!!

From your neglectful and overworked (for a lazy person it's double stress!) reader!!!!

Rosei
person Breathe Caught Holding
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a really different story. I'm not totally sure what was going on with When having sex with How and How not remembering anything. It seems a bit unbeleivable. I mean, I've done a lot of E and there are a lot of fuzzy memories, but there are some really clear memories and some of those involve sex. And When always seems to remember just fine, although maybe that has something to do with him always being less drunk than How. It seems like there must be something else going on. I just don't know what it is. As usual, with your writing, everything is just unbelievably vivid and enchanting. And of course, WTF is up with the psycho killer scene at the beginning? When will we learn more about that? Its driving me a bit nuts...although not as nuts as more of your angsty stories make me. I think I'm less on edge, because I am already expecting things to turn out poorly, so I'm not left riding the angst buzz. Anyway, great story so far. I am definately unsure of what will happen next and I like that.
person Rosei
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5.5

Delicious!!! Nutritious!!!

They're getting closer to the truth!!!!
And it's all sooooo exciting!!!! (And it's all due to ETOH! HA!)
How's just gotta remember this all tomorrow!!! (Or we're back to square one!!)

Love it how they're not on their own beds!!!! Should raise questions tomorrow!

Even though they're both so 'out of it' sometimes, I still feel the mutual love!!!
(And the lust! Thank you all so very, very much!!!)

It comes through in the writing just how much How loves When and (yes, it's really romantic!!!!) And I can't wait for when this story wraps around to chapter one!!!!

And holy crap but you guys write some hot sex scenes!!! (Thank you all very much!)
And so happy that I've another chapter to read!!!

Thanks!
R


And I've had to print it out because it actually has my name in it somewhere!!!!
Thank you both so very much!!!!
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohmygodohmygodohmygod
akljfsjeiodcsa
um...
i'm sorry
i can't really make any sense at all right now
you've fried my brain with the awesomeness
i can't wait to read more
When and How make my heart ache

-ariesgirl
person Koira
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am your loyal disciple. Hardly any story's update can make me as happy as this one does =)
person Koira
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice.
Very.
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omigosh omigosh omigosh
i spaz out every time that i see that this story has been updated
thaaaank you
it's so amazing
i want more though, please

-ariesgirl
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Their first conscious f**k! How exciting! I'm loving this so far.
person Rosei
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4

"OKAY," indeed!!! HA!!!!

When is such a desperate character
and he really needs to have the alcohol
screw@d out of him!!!!!! (Apparently!!)

Love how you're not afraid to sometimes go where
other authors dare not... into the "Of Human Bondage"
realm. Where some characters just can't or won't be
saved. (I know that really hasn't happened here and
I hope that they both, eventually get together, when they both
know that they are actually together. Hmmm... confusing.)

Anywho! Can't wait to see How's response to all this!!!
How seems a little off in his own sick way. I guess that's
why they are sooooooo right for each other!!!!!!!!

Thanks,
R

person Koira
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
We enjoy being people’s heroin. *grin*

You are, and you'll have us begging for reviews just like When is begging How... >.<