rate_review Reviews

Nice, I like it. The only pity is that you've made it a one shot. I really think you could have build something between the two. A nice smut scene for instance. Maybe if you ever feel like it.

THe only thing i wondered is why the hell Chase was staying with the barbie doll if he didn't really like her that much...well you do wonder why people do things sometimes.

Ok well the writing style was good. So thanks for this.