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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that you didn't kill Kylie off but I wonder what her life is going to be like when she wakes up...I can't imagine what Ryan and his goons are going to do to her...
Linda
Linda
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE A GREAT, MATERPIECE OF A WRITER AND I WISH I CAN WRITE LIKE U!
ITS 4: 15 AM AND I SPENT THE WHOLE NIGHT READING YOUR STORY!!!!
RYAN IS AN ASSHOLE
KYLIE DESERVES BETTER
A LOVING CLIENT PERHAPS! RYAN COULD GET JEALOUS
GOD ALMIGHTY HAS SERIOUSLY BLESSED YOU
LOVE YA !!!!
ITS 4: 15 AM AND I SPENT THE WHOLE NIGHT READING YOUR STORY!!!!
RYAN IS AN ASSHOLE
KYLIE DESERVES BETTER
A LOVING CLIENT PERHAPS! RYAN COULD GET JEALOUS
GOD ALMIGHTY HAS SERIOUSLY BLESSED YOU
LOVE YA !!!!
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Yes
I CRIED READING THE LAST CHAPTER
THATS HOW POWERFUL YOUR WRITING GOD ALMIGHTY HAS MADE
IT WAS, SORRY FOR THE LOSS OF WORDS:PERFECT
I CRIED READING THE LAST CHAPTER
THATS HOW POWERFUL YOUR WRITING GOD ALMIGHTY HAS MADE
IT WAS, SORRY FOR THE LOSS OF WORDS:PERFECT
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww thank you for the dedication!
And god! Poor Kyles! Yes, what he was asking of her and what he did was terrible, but she should have known hitting him wouldn't go well for her. But then again, when angry, I know for a fact that people don't exactly think rationally.
I can't believe Greg needled her too! That was so wrong!
And what was Ryan using on her feet? god! This all was so terrible.
Please update soon.
Love sensei
*hugs tight*
And god! Poor Kyles! Yes, what he was asking of her and what he did was terrible, but she should have known hitting him wouldn't go well for her. But then again, when angry, I know for a fact that people don't exactly think rationally.
I can't believe Greg needled her too! That was so wrong!
And what was Ryan using on her feet? god! This all was so terrible.
Please update soon.
Love sensei
*hugs tight*
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Honey I'm so proud of you! that was incredible! Awesome work!
Keep up the sessions; the explicitness; you're doing great!
Keep up the sessions; the explicitness; you're doing great!
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aahh I love this story! The last few chapters were so sad; this one was a welcome turn. It made me laugh and clap and smile and twirl around. Ryan is still a confusing little bastard who needs to be knocked upside the head a few times but you can't help but love him when he's like that.
And Kyllie is just adorable as always. Her refusal to play the Sex game made me laugh. I hope one day she learns that sex can be enjoyable. *sigh*
And Kyllie is just adorable as always. Her refusal to play the Sex game made me laugh. I hope one day she learns that sex can be enjoyable. *sigh*
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July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. I continue to be impressed by how perfectly you capture Kylie's emotions, all the confusion and anger, without making her into a dramatic angst-ridden teenage girl. I can't think of any critisms I could make that would improve what you already have here. *applause* Thanks again, and I look forward to updates on any of your stories.
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July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aahh. I think Greg is suspiceous. If she keeps that up, her esophigus will be swollen, sore and blisters will form around her mouth. Perhaps that's what he's looking for.
*nods*
I likes this chapter. Poor Kyllie. She's too thin. Maybe the men think they'll break her.
Awwww!
And Ryan is confusing as always.
*nods*
I likes this chapter. Poor Kyllie. She's too thin. Maybe the men think they'll break her.
Awwww!
And Ryan is confusing as always.
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July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woah this is getting a bit scary now, the way u describe her bulimic situation is so real and intense
keep up the good work
keep up the good work
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July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aahh! So close!
They don't know exactly what's wrong, but they know something's up! They will be watching her now.
And hey! You showed me the movie she saw! LOL
I like this chapter. Poor little thing.
What does she look like? I don't think there was much description and all that. Like, her, Sarah, Ryan, Greg...the house...what's it all like?
*thinks*
Ryan confuses me. He's kind one sec, not kind another...it makes me sad. It makes me wanna cry.
They don't know exactly what's wrong, but they know something's up! They will be watching her now.
And hey! You showed me the movie she saw! LOL
I like this chapter. Poor little thing.
What does she look like? I don't think there was much description and all that. Like, her, Sarah, Ryan, Greg...the house...what's it all like?
*thinks*
Ryan confuses me. He's kind one sec, not kind another...it makes me sad. It makes me wanna cry.