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Yay.. u finally updated.. that was an interesting chapter.. i wana see more ... update soon please

This story is getting better and better. It's really getting deep. I love it. Poor Kylie. Poor Sarah. I can't wait to read more!

*gasps* Oh! Oh poor Ryan! And a child! Somebody murdered an innocent little girl! *fumes*

Kyllie can probably hear him. People in comas can hear, even if they can't respond. Oh please update soon. This chapter was incredible.

And it explains a lot.

love the story, hope you continue it. its really good.

hugs for kylie, and ryan too, although his past doesn't excuse him. Congrats on another excellent chapter. I'm just glad that you're still updating this story as often as you are. Thanks again, you're a great writer and I enjoy reading your work.

oh my god...how are you going to leave it like that!? aaaarrrrggghhhh get me hooked, and leave me hangin! thats just wrong! Awesome story though...really...keep going...pweezzeeee??? ::gives cute puppy dog eyes::

Oh! My! GOOOOOOOOOOOOD!

THE BEST CHAPTERS YET!!!!

There's nothing like a twist that makes a reader's heart stop! I started bawling when I thought she was dead!

Incredible!

But uh-oh...Ryan's pissed. But keep in mind that if he's a bastard to her, she'll figure out other ways, even if they take everything away from her. She could bite her tongue and bleed to death, bash her head against something, smuther herself against even a wall...

You might at least want Ryan's feelings on this to leak...hold her...let her know he doesn't want her gone...

I cannot wait for the next chapter!

You are incredibly amazing.

oh my god...this is an awesome story! Serriously, its been a long time since i have found a really GOOD story to read. This one is great in that it is so real...even the slight errors in grammar fit to the age group (for example, hung instead of hanged). Keep up the good work hon :)

Oh, don't say its over yet!! What a sad ending...but I guess I never really expected Kylie to be able to rejoin her family again. I hope Ryan and Jason burn in hell for what they've done.

A very hard story to read but very well done!

Linda

So, that WAS brutal. However, as a faithful follower... can you please, please, please post a reaction chapter? I know that was the end, but an epilogue? Somehow I feel from reading this that Ryan wouldn't care she hung herself and never would Greg or Sara. Did her family ever find some peace of mind, or did it total shatter their whole world forever?

Oh, the harshness of a good author with an open-ended ending.