rate_review Reviews

MAAL I WANT MORE. ITS SO GOOD.

But damnit I want ryan to love her too.
*complain*.

MAAL BELLA WANTS MORE CHAPPIES NOWWWWW.
But its amazing.
and you're amazing.
As usual.
[<3]

I LOVED IT.
Mog that's awesome that her and ryan might get involved.
I'm pulling for a romance.


*mush*

i love this story/diary kinda thing.. please update sooonnnn

Oh I love this new Kyllie! And I love the budding thing between Kyllie and Sara. I really hope you continue with that; Ryan's too old for them both and maybe...maybe they'd be happy together. Don't shy away from the thought of lesbians...it's not a bad thing. They like one another and they understand one another. They're a good couple. I hope you at least consider it.

Poor Kyllie. And whoa! Ryan denying sex? Wow. But he's being so sweet about it. He's amazing.

I hope this continues; it's refreshing to read of such a change.

Hahaha! I have to comment on the little conceited moment first. Ryan is an arrogant little bastard. *smiles fondly at him*

Now. The chappie.

WOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOO! KYLLIE'S FIRST ORGASM!!!! AND WANTED TOO!!!!

We should throw a party! *wipes away a tear* Our little Kyllie's growing up so fast...

*grins* No seriously, that was an unexpected and really welcome twist. And the thing with Sara was very sweet and had just the right amount of awkwardness but love too. I think Sara's falling for Kylles. It's just really sweet.

And her little animal freakout attack. Wow. I was convinced Ryan would beat her for that little show, but he shocked and surprised my knickers off.

Ryan: *looks up* What was that about your knickers being off?
Nila: *whacks him upside the head* Get your ass back in that story where you belong. Sheesh. Men. *turns back to review*

Now. Where was I before I was so rudely interupted by Mr. Sex-on-the-brain over there in the corner? Um...*checks*...Aahh yes. Ryan's shocking me. Yeah. *nods* I thought she'd really be in for it for that. But no. He was actually understanding and just...really great.

And Kyllie's remembering some things. That's a good sign, even if what she's remembering is frightening or painful.

All in all, girl, this chapter was incredible. You really did an amazing job. And for someone who's not experienced at writing smut, you did really well.

*hugs you tight*

You have a safe move tomorrow. I'll miss you.

Love Nila

PS. If I could, I would give you a flashing ten for this chapter.

Awww! That was a sweet chapter! Tickling and then them actually being sorta civil...minus Ryan's little suicide speech and his slapping her. Sheesh.

I hope he's not going to just be really hard on her. I mean...I think maybe she'd cling to him; he's the one who was there; he told her some really personal stuff and well...I don't know.

But keep it up! This is great!

Awww! I love this! Yes, it's sad, but it's also different! Keep up the great work!

Poor Sara. I really hope you post more about their interactions with one another. I'd like to read more about Sara and about their friendship, even if it has to be now and not before all this. I just think it'll be nice to focus on the girls for a little bit; let us get a bit more familiar with Sara and Kyllie's bond and such.

But it's up to you. This chapter was fun to read. It was nice seeing her come home, but I could also feel the poor little one's fear and pain.

But she's being good for now. And that makes things easier. I like reading about life being easier for her. It gets old to just read about her constantly getting hurt.

Please update again soon!

Love Nila

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo great new chapter.

MOG IT WAS SO GOOD.

I want more though.
It's sad she doesn't remember anything but maybe she won't have to work as much anymore.

Ryan's still a dickweed.
Even if he does have a nice side.
Good story.
Update soon.


P.S. You're amazing.

Ryan is such a hypocrite! I mean, he can rape, beat and waterboard Kylie and then be shocked that she tries to kill herself? Greg is no better--he callously sells Sara to strange men and yet pulls her into his lap and is kind and tender as if she was his little sister or something.

I wonder what will happen when Kylie gets out of the hospital...Based on what his actions have been in the past, it wouldn't surprise me if as soon as she gets to her cell, Ryan will force Kylie to sleep with men to make up for the week that she was in the coma and wasn't making any money for him. Yeah, I can definitely see that happening.

This story is both hard to read and addicting at the same time. It is well written and heart rending and I hope you get over your writer's block to update soon! There are a lot of rabid readers like me who love this story!

Well done!
Linda