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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH NO, please don't let him kill k next. i can't believe he killed sara.
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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH NO! What's going to happen to Kylie now?? Will he kill her too? Please, please update soon!
Linda
PS, I appreciated the A/N response to my previous review. Even if the cops are in on this prostitution ring, I guess I thought that Melanie would take Kylie and Sara back to their homes, but now that Sara's dead...damn!
Linda
PS, I appreciated the A/N response to my previous review. Even if the cops are in on this prostitution ring, I guess I thought that Melanie would take Kylie and Sara back to their homes, but now that Sara's dead...damn!
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
To me, this story is two things: addictive and nauseating, (I mean, its hard to read without getting upset/sick). That is in NO way a bad term for the writing and storyline--both are terrific! Reading this story and watching a car accident is the same: you know you shouldn't watch--or in the case of this story--read but I can't help myself. In fact, I find myself checking aff.net each day to see if an update has been posted. I hope there is a really hot place in hell for Ryan and his band of kidnappers and pimps. And if there is anything karmic in the universe, I hope that either of these "men" come back as a girl they've done these horrible things to.
I was having high hopes for Ryan's girlfriend in that she would take Kylie and the others out of that dungeon and go straight to the police, but it seems that she cares more for Ryan than for the suffering of these girls. but I still have hopes that she'll come through in the end but I doubt it.
Again, I love this story even though it is extremely hard to keep reading. Maal, you've done a great job with this story!
Linda
I was having high hopes for Ryan's girlfriend in that she would take Kylie and the others out of that dungeon and go straight to the police, but it seems that she cares more for Ryan than for the suffering of these girls. but I still have hopes that she'll come through in the end but I doubt it.
Again, I love this story even though it is extremely hard to keep reading. Maal, you've done a great job with this story!
Linda
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooo daily updates, thats GREAT
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
glad you updated, a little slow but thats alright.
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kind of an odd chapter, but still liked it.
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn, poor kayla, will never know ryan's love for he loves another. poor poor girl.
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I don't believe this. Everything was going so well...I have to admit, I'm both interested and disappointed.
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 35
I love the way Kyllie is now! She's absolutely adorable! And awww! Ry-Ry! You ruined the game! *giggles*
And yay! You used my line! *laughs*
I love the way Kyllie is now! She's absolutely adorable! And awww! Ry-Ry! You ruined the game! *giggles*
And yay! You used my line! *laughs*
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September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How the HELL could he get ANY sleep after everything he's done???? He's a complete nutcase for god's sake!
I hope that Kylie goes wild and spill that asshole's guts out!
Whenever I read this, I want to kill him more and MORE! He makes me angry out of my mind! grrrr
I don't even care IF he frees her anymore! 'cause I know that I'll still fucking hate him and want him DEAD!
Anyways, I still wanna know how this will turn out and everything, but really, it's a pain in the ass... *sights*
Thanks for the update!
I hope that Kylie goes wild and spill that asshole's guts out!
Whenever I read this, I want to kill him more and MORE! He makes me angry out of my mind! grrrr
I don't even care IF he frees her anymore! 'cause I know that I'll still fucking hate him and want him DEAD!
Anyways, I still wanna know how this will turn out and everything, but really, it's a pain in the ass... *sights*
Thanks for the update!