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by kylienna

person Anon
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more more more.. please aadd LONGER chapters PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm amazed that Ryan let Kylie on the computer...I'm not surprised he watches her like a hawk, she is on it and could send an email home or something. I was surprised when Kylie says that she would rather be in the basement servicing customers than in the nightmare room--it must be dreadful for her to think that.

I wish someone would feed Ryan dog food...bastard!

Linda
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh, that bastard ryan, not feeding her after bitching her out for not eating. bastard.

omg whats going to happen next????? oh i don't have a good feeling about this.
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's chapters like this that remind me that Kylie is still a child that has been thrust into the world of adults and adult situations. She is naive and childlike but is a hell of a lot stronger than I would be if that had happened to me. At her age, I was raped by a family member and sexually abused over the course of 4 years but if I had been in a child prostitution ring would have killed me (or I would have done it myself).

Despite everything Ryan has done to her, when he is nice to her, she reacts and manages to forget what a beast he really is...until the next time she displeases him and he beats her. This story is so hard to read at times but I like it very much even though I want to cry sometimes.

Linda
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am hating Ryan even more than I thought it was possible to hate a fictional character. What a hypocrite! He lets Kylie be raped but comforts her afterward as if a cuddle will make it all better. god, I hate him! Greg is no better either and I hope there a really hot place for them in hell...

Linda
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great to know that. hope for more detailed and longer chapters ahead. i look for an update EVERY day hehe.
person Anon
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
bring back the cage and wot ryan wwas going to do to humiliate her!!!!
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn, engaged. oh well there goes the hopes of k reforming that bastard. hmm makes you wonder what he is up to that he doesn't want to sell her for sex anymore.
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooooo i am glad she likes what i call her. hehe. gods what is ryan doing to the poor girl????? he is majorly fucking with her head now and its not nice.

schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG, did he kill Sara like he said????? Omg whats gonig to happen to k. don't let this be the end of her.

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