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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel a LOT of dread for Kylie after I read this chapter. I know she's just a fictional character but I have grown to care about her a lot since I found this story....please, let everything be all right!
Linda
Linda
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmmm i wonder if Mr S means to keep her permanetly or somthing. boy ryan is acting strange very strange.
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG bastard, both of them bastards. even alex for beating her up badly after being shot. i mean OMG.
poor poor k *hugs and holds her tightly*
poor poor k *hugs and holds her tightly*
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, damn, damn!!
I guess the good thing about this chapter is that Kylie sees that even though Ryan and Alex may tease and flirt with her, they do not see her as a woman but only as a possession. It's never nice to be disillusioned like Kylie has been, but maybe this will open her eyes to how sadistic and brutal some men really are beneath the surface of their smiles.
Linda
I guess the good thing about this chapter is that Kylie sees that even though Ryan and Alex may tease and flirt with her, they do not see her as a woman but only as a possession. It's never nice to be disillusioned like Kylie has been, but maybe this will open her eyes to how sadistic and brutal some men really are beneath the surface of their smiles.
Linda
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So Ryan has a masters in economics? I guess that comes in handy when he's balancing the books from his prostitution ring....god, I hate him! I'm worried for Kylie when she meets Red. I hope she'll be all right but I doubt it.
Will this poor girl ever get to go home?? I am surprised that she doesn't think of her family often. I hiope that she does get out to see the city--more opportunities to escape...
I love the daily updates! I am very addicted to this story!
Linda
Will this poor girl ever get to go home?? I am surprised that she doesn't think of her family often. I hiope that she does get out to see the city--more opportunities to escape...
I love the daily updates! I am very addicted to this story!
Linda
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*uses mental powers* longer chapters longer chapters
hehe. can't help it.
hehe. can't help it.
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October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooooo their going on a trip hooray. and alex wants k. hmmm i don't know about that. wonder what that will stir up with ryan. hmm i wonder.
can't wait for another chapter, hope its longer. hint hint hehe.
can't wait for another chapter, hope its longer. hint hint hehe.
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October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I keep hoping that Kylie will find a way back to her family and with her being in NYC, she might have a chance to get away but I doubt she will even try to escape. Her spirit has been broken by Ryan's beatings and abuse. She does talk back to him but that's as far as it goes.
I just had a thought--Alex seems to be getting closer to Kylie--wouldn't it be perfect if Ryan and his brother both wanted her?
Keep going with the daily updates--I check the site every day to see if another chapter has been added and I doubt I'm the only one...
Linda
I just had a thought--Alex seems to be getting closer to Kylie--wouldn't it be perfect if Ryan and his brother both wanted her?
Keep going with the daily updates--I check the site every day to see if another chapter has been added and I doubt I'm the only one...
Linda
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have a question--what point was Ryan trying to make and what did Kylie finally understand? Can someone explain what I am missing?
Linda
Linda
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH NO Ryan don't leave her to Red, he will kill K. Don't leave her take her with you. PLEASE............