rate_review Reviews

hi, i was wondering if u were planning on continuing this?

What a wonderful start! You, my dear, have me completely hooked on this story! Your characters are fantastically written and realistic, and your writing itself is descriptive without being too much so. I've bookmarked this story as one of my favourites, and I sincerely hope that you continue with it! I'd love to see how their relationship grows.

Please keep up the great work!

YAY!!!!!!!!

You don't even KNOW how happy I am to see this new chapter (even though I'm way late on noticing it...)!! I've been hankering for a good read lately - been devouring books, actually, since I haven't really read anything but my own stuff for months...which is just depressing (oh, and thanks, btw!!) - and this new little tidbit has definitely satisfied me for the moment.

(I'm re-reading the prior chapters as I write this, so if it's all over the place forgive me). I think what I like the most about this chapter is the way Fanny has all these different revelations about herself, but none of them seem to really stick - does that make sense? I like that she looks at herself and kind of goes, "Oh, wow, look at me..." but at the same time still isn't really comfortable. It makes her easier to relate to and sympathize with, especially because she doesn't whine about it, she's just internally self-conscious.

I LOVED Quentin's reaction at the end (what a terrible place to leave us, though!!). Gave me the shivers the way he just stared at her (the good, can't wait to see the sexy man pounce on the unsuspecting protagonist shivers :) ). And I'm still in love with the way you write Fanny - witty and a little sarcastic. I actually found myself laughing out loud in a few places.

You MUST update! :) Not now, obviously, and no pressure - I totally understand how the writing process works (or doesn't, sometimes). But this is one of very few stories around here that I am really interested in following through to completion.

Great work! Keep going!

~cu-kid

Oh, and I forgot to ask, are you posting this anywhere else? I think you would find a good audience with it at FictionPress...

What an endearingly sweet read! The way you've written Fanny, with all her insecurities, bumblings, and amusing inner thoughts on the events and people around her (favorite so far: "Was that flirtatiousness in his voice? He should be careful throwing that around, she might have heart palpitations."), makes her lovable and relatable. I'm a sucker for witty characters (even if the wit stays internal, like it does with Fanny), and you pretty much had me hooked with the first line.

Loved these two chapters and I am definitely looking forward to future updates!

~cu-kid

yay!!!!! I love this story. I never even saw the update. I am glad I looked in this section today. Please update again. I love Fanny's crush has one on her to. LOL.

That was incredible and so well written. You have to update soon. Please. Pretty please. LOL Fanny is awesome character and this story has such a great plot I can't wait to find out what happens next.

This is a very nice beginning. You write very well, the story is interesting and easy to follow. And I do find myself wanting to know more about Fanny and her new 'friend'. Please continue...

Haha! I LOVE this! You had me with the first line, I seriously cracked up laughing. Brilliant! And yay! You got the meaning of the word fanny right! lol. Did I already say this was brilliant? Can't wait for more!