rate_review Reviews

I still love this story, but i'm a bit confused. You keep writing Adam is older but he's the year below Mitch so wouldn't Mitch be older? Or did I miss something in the story.

Anyway, its great and I love the way you're making the feelings develop without pushing them too quickly. Love it love it love it, can't wait for more!

Aduial

HATES YOU!

You stole my dream car. If I ever get the money for the car AND the money for gas it shall be mine!

Anyway, love the story. Can't wait for more.

I absolutely adored the bit about yaoifan girls regognising gays...its called a gaydar...any sensible none homophobic woman has one. Spot them a mile away...unless your young and naive lol.

I adore this story, its wonderful especially the way your making adam slowly fall for Mitch. I'm really happy you're not forcing them into anything, cause it wouldn't be very realistic. I really can't wait for more of this. There was another bit I really liked about the boring droning history teacher...you speaking from experience there? cause hell it's sounding pretty familiar to me. Lol keep up the great work

Aduial

Do keep up the good work, so far I find this rather and can't wait for more ^_^

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT! WOW! Can't wait to read more! Side note: I'm with Mitch, General Tao's chicken ROCKS!

Yeah, you made me so happy. I promised a long review this time didn't I? Well:

1) Seems like Adam is rather comfortable with the arragenment, rather more comfortable then any straight guy, well yeah. Hope they get to full on snogging soon. That would be absolutely fabulous.

I love the way you write, its really interessting. Aroon is a prat, don't understand homophobic people. My brother is but then he always gets felt up by gay guys so i think its more fear then anything else. Lol. Anyway this is great, I love Mitch, he's funny and I love Adam'S thought like the bit about not going lower...lol, now why would he have to think that in the first place hmm? ^-^ I adore this story, have added it to my faveourite list on my computer. Can't wait for the next chapter, keep the characters true to themselves.

Hugs Aduial

Hurray! Update! Yes, this IS my new favorite story, this chapter sealed it... I agree with the girl: it's so CUTE! ;o) Damn, we are all crazy... *lol* Keep it up, and after this chap, don't mind my earlier top/bottom comment, I can see Mitch as the bottom now too... I just pictured them differently... but again, switching can be fun... ;o)
What am I talking about, they haven't even kissed yet... *grin*

Yeah nice. I'm glad its def gonna be an M/M. Love Adams sister, sort of reminds me of me and my brother. I adored the last sentence, it was rather amusing.

I'm really sorry, I'd love to give you a real long review, but I have this major headache still from work, but I promise the one for you next chapter will be longer. *HUG*

*lol* how sweet! Really thought Adam would be the sub, though, but you know your characters better... on the other hand, IRL switching roles are more common than not... *grin* Can't wait for the next chap!

*lol* I think this might turn out to be my new AFF fav! Can't wait for more after this awesome start...