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November 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! Your last update for this awesome story was 4 fucking years ago!!!@@! I just about started to cry at the thought of it never getting finished. I'm soooooo sad right now. I told you I would check out your original stories because I was unfamiliar with the other fandoms you write in. This one sounded intriguing and I am so glad I did but jeez! I just can't take it anymore! Unfinished stories are one of my all time pet peeves. It literally hurts to be led on like some tantalizing lover and then PSYCHE! "I'm not really interested in you after all". (BTW, that actually happened to me - bad memories, man) Now, I'm scared to read any of your other original stuff. Are any of them finished? I see two that look like WIP cause of the recent updates. *shakes head slowly and sadly* It's always the good ones that disappoint.
Kay, I think I'm getting calm enough to write a real review. What can I say? It is a GREAT story. I admit that the premise drew me in and so I stuck with it despite the fact that I had no frame of reference. I'm getting too comfortable on this site, having ready-made characters to use in my imagination when in RL, a published book has to do the work of introducing them and giving background, etc. Anyway, by the end of the first chapter, I didn't need established personas, you did well in getting your hooks into me. I'm sorry I didn't give a review for each chapter. I bet that would have been delicious, as Ping, Ping, Ping, the emails start to roll in. However, when I read a story with a bunch of chapters already posted, I usually wait until I absorb the entire thing. So, as of chapter 8, the couple has wormed into my heart. Adam is amazing! He's so at ease with his own reactions. He doesn't really doubt his actions, just briefly ponders their appearance and maybe significance. It's so believable that he's bisexual and is just awakening to that. Apparently, he's demonstrated traits that his parents' interpreted correctly but he just accepted as normal for himself. It's so cool that his parents are supportive and Mitch's, too. (Mitch is just too cute)
Well, I'm thinking about what I can do to get you to finish this. Follow you around with puppy-dog eyes and whimper? More? Do you want blood? Cause I can get you blood. (Lab tech. joke) But seriously, if you need anything, ANYTHING, to help you continue and complete this, just ask. Catch me in the forum.
Kay, I think I'm getting calm enough to write a real review. What can I say? It is a GREAT story. I admit that the premise drew me in and so I stuck with it despite the fact that I had no frame of reference. I'm getting too comfortable on this site, having ready-made characters to use in my imagination when in RL, a published book has to do the work of introducing them and giving background, etc. Anyway, by the end of the first chapter, I didn't need established personas, you did well in getting your hooks into me. I'm sorry I didn't give a review for each chapter. I bet that would have been delicious, as Ping, Ping, Ping, the emails start to roll in. However, when I read a story with a bunch of chapters already posted, I usually wait until I absorb the entire thing. So, as of chapter 8, the couple has wormed into my heart. Adam is amazing! He's so at ease with his own reactions. He doesn't really doubt his actions, just briefly ponders their appearance and maybe significance. It's so believable that he's bisexual and is just awakening to that. Apparently, he's demonstrated traits that his parents' interpreted correctly but he just accepted as normal for himself. It's so cool that his parents are supportive and Mitch's, too. (Mitch is just too cute)
Well, I'm thinking about what I can do to get you to finish this. Follow you around with puppy-dog eyes and whimper? More? Do you want blood? Cause I can get you blood. (Lab tech. joke) But seriously, if you need anything, ANYTHING, to help you continue and complete this, just ask. Catch me in the forum.
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May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hope they get together!
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
no new chapter yet? :(
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December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man I really wanna know what happens next..
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November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please dont end this like "Take Me Away".
I've read this one up to the current chapter, and i've read take me away. theres still one more story i havnt read and after reading take me away, i'm afraid to read it.
I've read this one up to the current chapter, and i've read take me away. theres still one more story i havnt read and after reading take me away, i'm afraid to read it.
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November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait till they explore a little further!♥♥
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November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, im in love with this fic!!
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November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes PLEASE do update!!
How often do you update? Cause i definetly want to see the end of this!! :D
How often do you update? Cause i definetly want to see the end of this!! :D
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February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This has to be the most adorable bit of fluff ever. Love it. o_o More? Yes... more is needed. -Nods-