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for My Indian

by JAD

person Reike
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is great!
I love Rex! He's cool!
Can't wait for more =)
person mica1
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gay Cowboy? Do I have to say more? I`m definetively gonna like this story.
Really a very nice an interesting beginning, keep posting!
person Reike
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha I like it.
Rex is cool and sounds sexy as hell.
I love the test he gave him..kinda mean but funny too!
Great update hun!
x
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Surprised me to 'see' a Native American with curly hair. Interesting.

As my usual impatient self, can't wait for the action.

KD
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more ^^
person Zelasii
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far^__^
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice start.. Defiently have my hooked.. Keep up the good work!!
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I saw 'Indian' and nearly drooled. Great start.
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice start ^^ I like the dialogue a lot, it's very believable.

Keep it up!