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for My Indian

by JAD

person Peleia
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I am loving this story! Your prose is really clear and direct, just perfect for those gruff cowboys, but there's some great stuff hiding in there too... I love "There it was, the glimpse of a smile, all fire and enigma." Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All i can say is WOW!! This is awesome story.. Very nice ..Thanks for sharing!!!!
person Reike
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god!
I loved this chapter...Rex's a cutie..can I have him?
Poor Rex getting the crap beaten out of him.
Yay, is there gonna be smexing?
BTW the whole scene with Zack cleaning up Rex was really hot.
Nice update!
R
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know I've already said it - but Rex really IS a sweety! I knew it xD I love him so much.

Keep up the great work ^^
person loving
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Been reading this story and I love it. Hate that those men were beating on rex but if they didn't, their wouldn't be that wonderful hookup coming our way. Hope that you update soon.
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woo-hoo! Yay! Loved it. But, um, JA ... what patience? lol

Great double updates.

KD
person mica1
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh two Chapters!! I adore this story...there is something about Rex...that just makes me feel so...ok, I`m at the end of words in this language. Ok, to keep it simple: I like the story and was looking for an update nearly 5 times a day.
I didn`t think, that there would be sex this fast...but I liked it, it was somehow beautiful described...
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sexy and sweet. I love it!
person loving
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is like one of hte first story that I can even think of a condom being used, that safe sex is best. Now after all that sexing is done, let's look towards to the morning after.
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I like this story very much and I wonder how it will go on. I like how you describe the tension between Zack and Rex. I hope you'll post the next chapter soon.
Greetings
Sandra