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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Other than a few grammatical errors, this story is well-written and very, very juicy. Chapter Three added a bit of reality and dare I say a little bit of an obstacle, but it was a very nice touch.
Keep up the good work.
Keep up the good work.
schedule
July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very nice. I want to see what else they do for the next three days