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I check for updates but I don’t expect to see any. I was so surprised I almost though I had read it wrong. I'm also so happy. Welcome back. I missed you. Great update! I like the term toe,- - cute. I lobe that they are in love. I hope you don't drop us again and leave us waiting for a whole year! I know you don't owe us anything but we miss you when you are gone.

I'm really enjoying this, I hope you can update soon. :)

you just made my fucking day! XD so happy to see you're back. Loved, loved, loved the new chapters. Wasn't expecting Christine to be so calm about everything. And it was nice to get some insight into Charles, I'm very interested to see how it all goes when he finds out. And also, omggggg, Otoe" is so cute, now that I know what it means. I've never heard that before, it's so adorable that Merrick uses it. There's more I wanted to say, but I can't think of it right now.

wooooohoooo its good , ready for more pleases ! :D

I'm glad it feels damn good for you to be back, b/c I'll tell you Orbiting: it feels damn good to be reading your stories again. I gotta tell you, I've read many, many authors on here and you are one of the best. All your stories, and I've read each one, are amazing. They just pull you in and you're hooked from the first line. Each story is well thought out, well written, free from grammatical, spelling, and tense errors. They are such a pleasure to read.

I am so glad you're back!!!!! :)):) Maybe after you finish this awesome story, you'll finish that thirteen story. That was amazing too! :)

I chuckled at Theo's mom's plan to reel Charles into the "gay lifestyle" of his stepson and his nephew. Idk if it's gonna work. I don't think it will. But then again, after hearing Christine tell Merrick how hard Charles tried to help Merrick's dad, maybe Charles will surprise them all. I hope so.

Anyway, loved the chapter, as usual. Oh, hey, I didn't remember: did Merrick go and have the STD test taken? I remember a few chapters ago, before they had sex, he was going to do that. I know they used a condom the first time, but he should still be tested. Especially since he's been with all these unsavory characters.

Can't wait for more! :)

loved it!

ch full of amazing

I LOVE this story. I've been reading it since you started and I'm soooo happy you updated! I love the dialogue and interactions between Theo and Merrick - it's amazing! Keep it up!!
-Asher

Oh my freaking jeezus i love Theo! He is just sooo..... THEO! i LOVE that he is anal and an overachiever and that he has skillz in self-defense. The fact that he gets along with everybody for no apparent reason is awesome lol merrick is just a douche who needs a reality and attitude check pronto. *giggle* but theo love him lol and it's only 2 chapters in, that is so crazy.

Wow but merrick is such a teen and i mean that in the bad way. Theo is just too nice for his own good.