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I had missed these two. But this chapter was way too short compared to the last ones and nothing too substancial hapened. I get the feeling it was cut in half somehow. : /

Anyway, does this mean you'll be coming back and continuing this?

I'm really glad to see you updating. This is definitely one of the best stories not only on this site but on the Internet in general (in my humble opinion, but to me that's the opinion that counts most, obviously). Take as much time as you need to finish it (and enything else you fancy to write), I'll wait for new chapters anyway.
Cheers.

I was so happy to see this updated. In all honesty I don't care how long it takes. The quality is worth the wait. I enjoy watching them feel out their relationship because they do behave and thing so differently. I'm torn between wanting to see them all the time and dying to know how Charles is going to react to their announcement after his enlightening weekend.

Grad school, schmad school. lol Just kidding. School is way more important than updating stories. Well, it comes in at a close second...lol

So does this mean once grad school is over, you'll update this and your Thirteen story? And any others I forgot to mention?

But I'm so glad you updated this; I was sure it was a goner....:( But glad I was mistaken! :)

I love Merrick, trying to get Theo all relaxed and comfy in his drunken stupor! hahah Just not too drunk that he won't remember anything!

Well, they have the whole house to themselves for a couple of days; hope they put this time to good use! =)

Anxiously looking forward to more Orbiting! :)

Wow-ee! I just power read through all of this and I have to say-I adore this story! I adore these boys and I cannot WAIT to read what happens next! Gosh, I really feel like I can identify with Theo so well! ^-^ And I love watching Merrick's character growth-OH! And the whole "meaning of toe" thing was so sweet!!! Please update soon!

PS-My only critique is that when you quote something within quotes you're supposed to us apostrophes, not quotation marks. Literally my critique. Love it.

I can't wait for more of this story. When I was reading the part where Theo was watching the movie and Merrick said that he'd rather die being saved than die because no one tried, my mind decided to give me this alarm: "Obvious foreshadowing! Somewhere in the future, Brent is going to be threatening Merrick in front of Theo, and Theo will remember this conversation!"

I'm really glad that they got together because they make each other feel when no one else has done that before. I read this story a while ago, and I tried to keep up with the chapters, but it got lost in my life, but I've found it again and read it in its entirety. I'm glad I found it again. Please update soon! I'm looking forward to seeing Brent make his move.

ASOTA

So yeah, I've just read this story for the second time this year and I'm wondering, the last time you've updated was in April. I'm kinda wondering if you've given up on it. If so, maybe you could put a note or something? Because I really like this story, the premise is interesting, the characters are interesting and I'm too curious to know what happens next. If you have no intentions of finishing it I could just get it off my mind.

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YOU WROTE MORE!!! I want to use a smily face but there aren't any that accurately capture my face right now
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you're amazing and wonderful and I just looked up your account to reread some of your stories and HOLY SHIT YOU UPDATED
I love this story so much
thank you thank you thank you

Okay so I have just re-read this story again and I would like you to know that you should update. Because it is awesome. I love the characters in all your stories they are so diverse and intricate it's a pleasure to read. I wish you luck in RL and hope you can update again soon. :)

I LOVE YOUR STORIES! they are basically my absolute favorite on here. I loveee theo I think he's adorable, and I also love Merrick and their chemistry together, please update soon!!