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This made my miserable fucking Sunday so much better when I saw you updated!

So didn't Trunkett (is that how it's spelled?) ask Theo exactly what happened? When the hospital called the police after Theo called for the ambulance, didn't the hospital relay what Theo had explained?

Well, I'm confident Theo will get off (ha, no pun intended; ok, lame I know) on self-defense, or defense of his cousin/lover, hahah. He should get a medal, at least according to that young cop.

I just hope Merrick's ok. But thank God Brent can't hurt him anymore.

Awesome, awesome update; thank you Orbiting for making my Sunday a little bit brighter. :)

hay this story is amazing way better then half of the stuff i have ever read just sad that its not done.... im going on deployment and its killing me that i wont be able to find out whats gonna happen for the next 7 to 8 months ugh... well (paul . edwards 2@ us . army . mil) i just want to know if you going to have theo in jail or not ill be depressed for sure but thank you for writing such an epic story

Oh God, you have to update soon! What's going to happen? I just wanna cry. ;_;
ASOTA

Oh fuck. Just fuck. I'm in tears now. ;~;

So glad you're back.

Aaahhh!! I saw this update two days ago, but I was scared to read it, because I know your writing, and I knew it was going to be intense. Not a let down. Nooot a let down. Perfection.
I was not expecting Theo at all, but it was wonderful. And I'm so happy he's logical.
Thank you for all of you amazing stories. I'm sorry I don't comment very often, but I look forward to, read and love everything you post.

I love your stories, it's really good. You write like a pro :D

Oh man, been waiting for this scene a while now! Of course, the hinting was pretty strong, but still. Damn. Is Teo going to jail? No matter how valiant it was, that was still homicide. : /

he, I kinda saw it coming, after reading that "pussy hero"-chapter... just hope they're getting out of it without too much hassle... I just feel that Theo is a little naive about that "we're innocent"-stuff... well, I'll just hope for the best - and the next chapter ^^

Omg, two updates in a week! I'm in Theo/Merrick heaven!

Shit Theo was brave! :) How the hell did he wrangle Brent's gun away from him?

Now Merrick needs serious medical attention. I'm praying he'll be alright; he has to be; now that he's finally free from Brent!

Awesome job; I was on pins and needles! :)

AHHH Theo shot him! Did he kill him?! Was it a headshot? It went from super sweet to an adrenaline rush in just a few chapters. I don't want you to think I'm rushing you, but I want to read more!