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for Better Now

by orbitingjupiter

person Anon
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update when you can!! i can't wait to read more!!
ASOTA
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So I have pretty much just finished reading all your fics, and I have to say, It's Like This is my favourite, but they are all GENIUS. So well written and the characters are realistic and well rounded. I'm looking forward to seeing more of this one, it feels very real to me. So far at least. But I love your work, and I'm a big fan. Please keep up the good work. I mean, original slash always seems to dwell in the land of impossible and unrealistic, but your writing is very grounded and doesn't seem at all too angsty. There's angst, but it feels real. Anyhow, keep up the great work.
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Have you foresaken us?
person ariesgirl
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is really really good
I'd like to think that Theo is growing on Merrick, yes?
can't wait for more
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going. Nice update.
person Anon
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm glad theo came and got him. i just wish merrick would appreciate it... UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!
ASOTA
person etrenoir
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah !! update ^.^
I think I started to like Theo in this chapter :D
Looking forward to the next chapter
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another update ^^

I love how OCD Theo is. I almost don't blame Merrick for being constatly annoyed with him - I'd go crazy living with him too xD

Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep it up :D
person irinutza
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow i like it so much so far. I like theo being so innocent but still not so helpless.
Keep writing it for us :P
person Black Sharne
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Interesting and original new characters! Plus, you're doing good with the third person, I think you shouldn't worry about that.

I wish you good luck and keep on the good work!

:)

Black Sharne