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Ha, I was the 1666th hit to this story.

Oof, I love this. It's so strange, it has two characters that, by themselves, would make my eyes bleed but together they just work. It's really quite good, and I think much of that has to do with the hand that's guiding them along. There are millions of good boy/bad boy stories out there, but this one stands out. It's easy and complex all at once, distinctive in the little things that glue them together. Oh, and I really like Theo's mom, the little bits we see of her are fresh and real and I'd like to hear more from her section of the peanut gallery.^^

Well, you made my day when I saw you had updated. The least I can do is say thank you again. Poor Sophie, it made me cringe to see the way Merrick was treating her, no matter how clueless she was. Hurting people just because you can is cruel, high or not. Andy is a jerk too and he was stone sober, so no excuse there. It seems Theo is starting to come into terms with his sexuality. I wasn't expecting this so soon into the story. I wonder what he'll do. He seems so sincere and open, I can't see him denying the obvious once he realizes he's gay or even hiding it later on. But of course he'd be afraid to disappoint his family. Good stuff. I really like Theo's mother, I am seconding K M B here, I'd like to read more about her.

Thank you for the update! You should quit your job and become a full time writer. I'd buy one of your books in an instant.

WUH. GUH. OMG. I like. Thought this was dead.

OMFG I REALLY ADORE THIS STORY. It practically made my day when I saw it was updated.

WAAAAAH PLEASE UPDATE SOON? Pleeaase? I'll keep an eye open :DDD

Thank You.

I really like your writing. Can't wait for more.

AWWWWWWWWWWW
that was so incredibly cute
i think i love stoned Merrick

I still like it. You do tender very well. I need some tender right now, so pour it on! There is something you put in your characters that makes them different, but not unrealistic. Like someone I don't know, but could. Anywho, keep it up.

Great chapter. Kinda sweet...I liked it. Keep up the good work!

HAHAHA OMG THEO'S NOT A VIRGIN.

I dunno. For some reason, I just really thought he was. Like, if a girl ever came onto him, he'd just get all flustered and, like... clean the room instead, or something. BUT HE'S NOT. LOOOOOL. And he lost is at BIBLE CAMP too, holycrap! xDDDD It kinda reminds me of that movie Saved. SO FUNNYYYYYY.

OH GOD please update soon? :DDDDD *waits*

Thanks a lot for updating this, working 65 hours a week, no less! You are my hero ;). I'm really enjoying this story, it always amazes me how you manage to give your characters a distinctive personality with just a few lines. That paragraph at the beginning about how Theo obsesses with events, it was pure genius, he wouldn't have been a realistic character without it. Poor Theo is the first surprised that everyone likes him, see how he asks his friend about it - another strike of genius, btw. Still, I can understand why he gets on Merrick's nerves. He seems perfect and pictures of perfection disgust people - Jane Austen dixit. But it's just a picture, not the real person, you've made it clear. Keep on writing and once again, a big thank you. If you ever get published, please let us know. You're better than most authors out there.